Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/17/18, 2:41 AM
That was hot ! no sex is fine. as long as there is a sexy humiliation. Thanks for writing :)
12/17/18, 1:59 AM
Thanks to everyone who stuck with the story over the three months it took to write and post!
12/17/18, 1:58 AM
You've got a gift for writing dialog! The whole section while they were fucking was hypnotic.
Chuy
12/17/18, 1:45 AM
damn this series is good. Are luis and angel going to change and are these guys going to keep growing or just the new members? i love it so keep it up guey!
Anonymous
12/17/18, 1:32 AM
while I do love the changes and this is the best chapter yet. It would be cool to see what longer term effects these changes have had on the world. interactions between the bear trio, lightning strikes, the twister, and papa ray could be super cool. You mentioned that the editor has been adjusting Lightning strikes' backstroy, I would love to see the interactions that spurred that on and how that plays out. These are just some suggestions to take an awesome story to a classic
Jacinto
12/17/18, 1:26 AM
hell yeah! why would he want to go back from all this good? i wouldnt jaja
Anonymous
12/16/18, 11:39 PM
i agree with everyone else
thenakedginger@gmail.com
12/16/18, 11:22 PM
Hey guys! I'm traveling this week for work so not sure I'll be able to get much done for this series this week. I do have another quick chapter I want to get up tomorrow to setup as far as my mind has gone with the story but it will be a quick one to move the story forward (nosex warning).
12/16/18, 10:26 PM
What a fascinating story! Just a few personal fetishes that might give you some inspiration for future installments: - More leather and rubber. - Cops and military hunks. - Demons. I am fascinated by the combination of perfect muscular bodies with horns, evil grins and twisted minds who want to corrupt and turn others into one of them. I like the idea of a demon breeding a human who is then corrupted and turned into an evil being whose sole purpose is to corrupt and convert others in order to create an army of lustful demons. If you think that you can work with something like that, here are some ideas of how you could develop your story: a) A kind-hearted, caring, good-natured "slim like a twig" (as you said) hero with the power to make others show their good nature turns into this sinister, evil, sexy muscular demon who's power is to corrupt people and turn them into lustful demon/devilish beasts (this idea comes from an awesome comic I read a few years ago called "Demonic Sex"), b) the same transformation ending from hero to villain but instead of having a kind-hearted, caring, good-natured "slim like a twig" hero, you could have a muscular, overbearing, arrogant cop or a military persona who fights crime, is sure about himself, always catches the villains and likes to brag about what he is capable of doing and use all these character traits to create his downfall by boosting all this arrogance to the point where he becomes sinister, corrupted, evil and eventually turned into a more beefy, muscular demon. A few ideas/additions to this whole demon scenario could be the use of leather/rubber attire for the villain like Patrick Fillion's *Deimos*. Also you could use the image of Daredevil in whatever way suits you better.
Anonymous
12/16/18, 9:04 PM
more please, a normal man who becomes a club owner where straight man enters and leave a bit more gay ( with random fetishes)