Recent Comments

Bibimbap
12/17/18, 7:49 PM
This story keeps going better and better! WOW! Good job with the 3 bears, I like that. Twister seems to have very powerful powers, I wonder what plans do you have for him. But I still want to know, what happened with Elastic Stretch? I'd love to know how his life became altered and twisted. Would be cool if the edits that are made collaterally are not exactly perfect (that's it, because Jean didn't edited Stretch's persona directly), and the transformed hero is half aware of the changes, but is unable to put any resistance. At this point you have many good characters and transformed heroes and villains. I'd love if you make a chapter showing us how interact with the new universe (you know, what kind of crimes they commit, or "heroics" act they make), or one with an actions scene to see many of them in action, and a t this point, the action scene would be easily turned into an orgy, ha, ha, ha! keep working, please! the story is really cool!
Dec 17, 2018
12/17/18, 6:45 PM
This is great! I can't wait until Jacob and Corey share their cake pops with some of the straight boys on campus.
Anonymous
12/17/18, 6:12 PM
Love this! Please continue
Anonymous
12/17/18, 5:59 PM
I agree! Definitely like the plot... just wish it was longer
Anonymous
12/17/18, 5:56 PM
I love this series so much! The humiliation is great!
Dec 17, 2018
Anonymous
12/17/18, 5:38 PM
Welcome aboard
Anonymous
12/17/18, 5:01 PM
awesome!!
Anonymous
12/17/18, 4:54 PM
That was a great chapter - no worries if there's no sex. There are a lot of opportunities. He could be dared to walk around with a butt plug up his ass!
Dec 17, 2018
12/17/18, 4:34 PM
Thanks guys! I really enjoyed writing this one. I think some of my own GM voice crept into the story there, too. xD.
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
12/17/18, 4:33 PM
Take my wallet & checkbook PLEASE. Only suggestion is with brothers, there should be more payback, or revenge oriented compared to standard customer treatment.