Recent Comments

Willie Cici
12/17/18, 5:27 AM
This is just incredible, but it's because of your vision and imagination. That's what makes a good story. I'm loving it. I can't wait. Follow your instinct and write. Whatever it is, I'm sure I'm enjoy it.
Anonymous
12/17/18, 4:33 AM
can't wait to see what happens next!
Anonymous
12/17/18, 2:41 AM
That was hot ! no sex is fine. as long as there is a sexy humiliation. Thanks for writing :)
12/17/18, 1:59 AM
Thanks to everyone who stuck with the story over the three months it took to write and post!
12/17/18, 1:58 AM
You've got a gift for writing dialog! The whole section while they were fucking was hypnotic.
Chuy
12/17/18, 1:45 AM
damn this series is good. Are luis and angel going to change and are these guys going to keep growing or just the new members? i love it so keep it up guey!
Anonymous
12/17/18, 1:32 AM
while I do love the changes and this is the best chapter yet. It would be cool to see what longer term effects these changes have had on the world. interactions between the bear trio, lightning strikes, the twister, and papa ray could be super cool. You mentioned that the editor has been adjusting Lightning strikes' backstroy, I would love to see the interactions that spurred that on and how that plays out. These are just some suggestions to take an awesome story to a classic
Jacinto
12/17/18, 1:26 AM
hell yeah! why would he want to go back from all this good? i wouldnt jaja
Anonymous
12/16/18, 11:39 PM
i agree with everyone else
thenakedginger@gmail.com
12/16/18, 11:22 PM
Hey guys! I'm traveling this week for work so not sure I'll be able to get much done for this series this week. I do have another quick chapter I want to get up tomorrow to setup as far as my mind has gone with the story but it will be a quick one to move the story forward (nosex warning).