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Nov 24, 2018
Anonymous
12/16/18, 4:51 PM
Hot story with a fun twist.
Anonymous
12/16/18, 4:48 PM
****Good job! Love the tie-in to New York Magazine, and being a New Yorker myself, of course I'm imagining my old gym on 53rd & 3rd as the gym near the protagonist's work (and a hell of a lot of sex went on THERE too, even here in the real world!) Living in the NY burbs now myself, imagining some of my hotter neighbors coming around to my way of getting my groove on had my cock hard - your pacing is excellent - your warned us it was a slow burn story, but you give us enough sexual thoughts and then actual sex to keep us going through the build up. There are some other writers who tease far too long and I eventually stop bothering to read the story, and taking note of their screennames, genearlly stop reading ANY. Thanks for this!**
Anonymous
12/16/18, 4:43 PM
HOOOT! cant wait to read how their dormmates get fucked into real men with big hard cocks and cum hungry fuck holes!
Anonymous
12/16/18, 4:34 PM
I love it, can you continue, please?
blankbot
12/16/18, 4:30 PM
I like the scene with the bearded, hairy guy. Nice that he's "tender," too, not a brute.
12/16/18, 4:14 PM
WóÓÔÒòF! 🐻 This pushed all of my buttons! Can't wait to see where this goes!
Anonymous
12/16/18, 4:14 PM
Agreed with the last comment. Make one into a daddy bear who influences the other college boy to depravity. Maybe with the reality change make him the other boy's literal dad. >:)
12/16/18, 3:43 PM
Enjoying the story so far, keep up the good work. Hoping something might happen between the main character and his son but looking forward to seeing what happens.
Thegreatstoryteller
12/16/18, 3:30 PM
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Thegreatstoryteller
12/16/18, 3:29 PM
astounding! Another series of mariposa finished andn beautifully written. I really appreciate all the work you put in to these stories. Everthing from the first chinese gymnast bottle to Todd's new form was incredibly described. i imagine todd looks like this:[](https://www.pinterest.com/pin/371265563008984108/#details?amp_client_id=GUi7t8EwVRQqZeIqUleMolk6lnBkqnw2ynmqkV26mlP5FulFJtFQj9DAboRr_bTb&mweb_unauth_id=3869716a4d3f4679a3fcacaab9910961) anyway, i do wish that todd and his new form got more time at the end. woudlve loved to see him interact with the new permanent blu, and him look like the older of the two. but what we had was still satisfying. thank you!