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12/16/18, 4:14 PM
WóÓÔÒòF! 🐻 This pushed all of my buttons! Can't wait to see where this goes!
Anonymous
12/16/18, 4:14 PM
Agreed with the last comment. Make one into a daddy bear who influences the other college boy to depravity. Maybe with the reality change make him the other boy's literal dad. >:)
12/16/18, 3:43 PM
Enjoying the story so far, keep up the good work. Hoping something might happen between the main character and his son but looking forward to seeing what happens.
Thegreatstoryteller
12/16/18, 3:30 PM
https://www.pinterest.com/pin/371265563008984108/#details?amp_client_id=GUi7t8EwVRQqZeIqUleMolk6lnBkqnw2ynmqkV26mlP5FulFJtFQj9DAboRr_bTb&mweb_unauth_id=3869716a4d3f4679a3fcacaab9910961
Thegreatstoryteller
12/16/18, 3:29 PM
astounding! Another series of mariposa finished andn beautifully written. I really appreciate all the work you put in to these stories. Everthing from the first chinese gymnast bottle to Todd's new form was incredibly described. i imagine todd looks like this:[](https://www.pinterest.com/pin/371265563008984108/#details?amp_client_id=GUi7t8EwVRQqZeIqUleMolk6lnBkqnw2ynmqkV26mlP5FulFJtFQj9DAboRr_bTb&mweb_unauth_id=3869716a4d3f4679a3fcacaab9910961) anyway, i do wish that todd and his new form got more time at the end. woudlve loved to see him interact with the new permanent blu, and him look like the older of the two. but what we had was still satisfying. thank you!
Anonymous
12/16/18, 3:29 PM
I love the incest! I hope we will hear more from the bear family.
Dec 14, 2018
ForgottenCradle
12/16/18, 2:43 PM
beautiful one-shot
12/16/18, 2:42 PM
You see, this is exactly why I don't write very detailed descriptions of what my characters look like. Because when I think "sadsack suburban dad who's having marital problems," I would never imagine Jason Momoa. But it's cool that you do, and that this makes the story hotter for you.
Anonymous
12/16/18, 2:31 PM
The sauna scene is hot! In my mind I've got a Jason Momoa type with our slowly changing diarist. Can't wait for the Super Bowl Party and a bit more fun with hot Dan!
firesix
12/16/18, 2:09 PM
I love the reality change genre and no one writes it quite like you. Everyone suddenly getting a Grindr and having sex in public... that's incredibly hot. Can't wait for more.