Recent Comments

Dec 17, 2018
12/17/18, 8:20 AM
Glad to see you over here man! I really liked this one. Really liked how Charles ended up being the character.
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
12/17/18, 7:52 AM
I hope we will see more of this series in the future, what about a person with the ability regeneration? what could he became after being edited by the editor?
rubberchap
12/17/18, 7:31 AM
Gay to Straight - not what were used to here! Kudos!
Willie Cici
12/17/18, 5:27 AM
This is just incredible, but it's because of your vision and imagination. That's what makes a good story. I'm loving it. I can't wait. Follow your instinct and write. Whatever it is, I'm sure I'm enjoy it.
Anonymous
12/17/18, 4:33 AM
can't wait to see what happens next!
Anonymous
12/17/18, 2:41 AM
That was hot ! no sex is fine. as long as there is a sexy humiliation. Thanks for writing :)
12/17/18, 1:59 AM
Thanks to everyone who stuck with the story over the three months it took to write and post!
12/17/18, 1:58 AM
You've got a gift for writing dialog! The whole section while they were fucking was hypnotic.
Chuy
12/17/18, 1:45 AM
damn this series is good. Are luis and angel going to change and are these guys going to keep growing or just the new members? i love it so keep it up guey!
Anonymous
12/17/18, 1:32 AM
while I do love the changes and this is the best chapter yet. It would be cool to see what longer term effects these changes have had on the world. interactions between the bear trio, lightning strikes, the twister, and papa ray could be super cool. You mentioned that the editor has been adjusting Lightning strikes' backstroy, I would love to see the interactions that spurred that on and how that plays out. These are just some suggestions to take an awesome story to a classic