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Anonymous
12/16/18, 10:13 AM
A Hollywood worthy story with a twist. I could actually see this made into a movie. Bravo!
Anonymous
12/16/18, 8:18 AM
another good installment :)
Anonymous
12/16/18, 7:47 AM
didnt know what direction this story was headed in the first part but im liking it now! Thanks hypnothril!
12/16/18, 6:22 AM
Always so flattering when I get comments like this, although I must admit people praising my work *still* feel's a bit weird to me sometimes. Don't you worry, there's going to be more chapters revolving around Delta Phi and Zeta Tau. lots of room for new straight arrow Josh to be tugged between who he is and who he was :3.
Cutlerfan
12/16/18, 4:55 AM
I hope there is more! Excellent!
Anonymous
12/16/18, 3:37 AM
want that ice cream, bro!!
BarryD
12/16/18, 3:16 AM
I like the pacing. You are leaving room to actually build up to something big instead of immediately going hardcore and having nowhere else to go. Also like that you are going to try to put rules to the dares. Brandon couldn't follow Dylan's dare to get dressed since it went against the dare to stay naked. On the other hand, Dylan was able to cancel his dare of making Brandon put clothes back on; which makes me think you cancel dares but not have contradicting dare or maybe you can only undo/change dares that you made. I honestly don't know if I'd rather Dylan actually be good or turn out to have other things in mind. If Dylan is good and isn't the person who is texting Brandon, the texter could have a lot of fun making Brandon humiliating himself with Dylan and pushing Dylan to the limits of friendship. But if Dylan is bad...then you have the wonderful dynamic of Dylan pretending to be helping Brandon while also being the one tormenting him. Either way, Brandon is humiliated and broken Regardless of if Dylan is truly good or secretly evil, it seems like his best move would have been to dare Brandon to only listen to his dares. If he is good, he would just never dare Brandon; on the other hand, if he wanted to have fun with Brandon it would insure that no one else could interfere
firesix
12/16/18, 3:00 AM
Always love your work Chao. One thing that I would've liked would've been more time with Josh at the end, since I especially like the cognitive dissonance aspect in stories like Out of the Well and Overseas Operation and his mental transformation seemed to be right along those lines. But that's just a matter of personal preference, not of the quality of the story. Excellent work again. Never stop writing, I always look forward to new stories from you!
firesix
12/16/18, 2:43 AM
Incredibly hot. Definitely write more, you have real talent.
Anonymous
12/16/18, 2:03 AM
What an awesome story! I have really enjoyed reading it.