Recent Comments

A curious reader
10/20/24, 6:32 PM
What happened to this storyyy
Xackery
10/20/24, 5:36 PM
Wow! That was EXTREMELY hot!! I really love Kyle’s transformation into fatherhood, it was kind of sweet reading the ending :-)
10/19/24, 11:40 PM
Great start to what I hope will be a hot multi-part story!

10/20/24, 4:59 PM
@[Demonicus Satani (Solo)](/user/show/588192) Thank you! That's the plan :)
10/19/24, 2:07 PM
Wow. Love this!

10/20/24, 4:59 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Thanks! I've never written stories before, so this is a fun learning experience.
Anonymous
10/20/24, 4:33 PM
When he said that Jake is the love of his life and he felt so heart broken and betrayed, it really resonated with me, and how he knew that the System must incorporate Jake to be his good Beta Drone. I want to become part of the System.
ls1999
10/20/24, 3:41 PM
I can see the professor confronting to coach, only to end up hypnotised by him. I’m loving the story so far though, and I personally am rooting for Lucas to win out!
Suitlover
10/20/24, 11:24 AM
Very nice story. Love the fact that they were all suited. Hope you will continue this series.
10/20/24, 10:39 AM
oh man, talk about a cliffhanger! I wanna know what becomes of the pilot!!
10/20/24, 9:10 AM
All got a bit complicated for me.