Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/14/18, 3:34 PM
Well, since you insist on posting stories, let me be the first to say that your writing style sucks. Your grammar is non-existent and your spelling is childish. I don't even know which character is speaking during the dialogues. The premise is okay, but, you're not even taking the time to edit. Just run Spell and Grammar Check on MSWord. It takes all of three minutes.
Anonymous
12/14/18, 3:18 PM
Hot!! Loved it!!!
David
12/14/18, 3:10 PM
I've really enjoyed each installment of this series! Such a creative idea overall, and great execution of it in the writing. Kudos!
Anonymous
12/14/18, 2:06 PM
Are you not continuing story? I actually was getting into it.
12/14/18, 1:57 PM
I _like_ Dylan.
Anonymous
12/14/18, 12:52 PM
i loved this story so so much. i was curious though, in the Steve and Kyle pic, which one did you envision as steve and which one was Kyle?
Dec 14, 2018
Anonymous
12/14/18, 12:52 PM
HOT, thank you!!
Dec 14, 2018
Anonymous
12/14/18, 12:49 PM
I was a bit confused about where this was going at first, as a masseuse is a female masseur.
Anonymous
12/14/18, 12:26 PM
Great start! Love where this is heading.
Joel
12/14/18, 12:26 PM
I like the ch. 2. excellent and well done. I hope the next chapter is some of brandon's neighborhood will dare him. (young boy with unruly attitude)