Recent Comments

Joel
12/14/18, 12:26 PM
I like the ch. 2. excellent and well done. I hope the next chapter is some of brandon's neighborhood will dare him. (young boy with unruly attitude)
Anonymous
12/14/18, 11:37 AM
please release it fast.
Anonymous
12/14/18, 11:37 AM
Please post more of this kind of story and please add element of resistant (i mean brendan really a tough guy to be hypnotized) with brendan & cum to lost his own self .
12/14/18, 10:44 AM
Yeah .... I guess Dylan is just a good friend. hopefully there would be more chapters soon tho. xx
Kyle
12/14/18, 8:46 AM
Fantastic. Hope there's more to come based on that ending. Great work!
Anonymous
12/14/18, 8:31 AM
this chapter is a bit of a let down compared to the other two
Oct 20, 2018
Anonymous
12/14/18, 6:39 AM
Man, that was GREAT: I'd love to see a continuation of this!
Anonymous
12/14/18, 6:03 AM
wonderful story!!!
Anonymous
12/14/18, 5:07 AM
Great story!! Cool how you reworked the movie plot! Awesome!
Dec 12, 2018
firesix
12/14/18, 1:59 AM
Agree about both the images and the writing. I love the concept but remember capitalization and everything. It can really make a difference.