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Anonymous
12/14/18, 11:37 AM
Please post more of this kind of story and please add element of resistant (i mean brendan really a tough guy to be hypnotized) with brendan & cum to lost his own self .
12/14/18, 10:44 AM
Yeah .... I guess Dylan is just a good friend. hopefully there would be more chapters soon tho. xx
Kyle
12/14/18, 8:46 AM
Fantastic. Hope there's more to come based on that ending. Great work!
Anonymous
12/14/18, 8:31 AM
this chapter is a bit of a let down compared to the other two
Oct 20, 2018
Anonymous
12/14/18, 6:39 AM
Man, that was GREAT: I'd love to see a continuation of this!
Anonymous
12/14/18, 6:03 AM
wonderful story!!!
Anonymous
12/14/18, 5:07 AM
Great story!! Cool how you reworked the movie plot! Awesome!
Dec 12, 2018
firesix
12/14/18, 1:59 AM
Agree about both the images and the writing. I love the concept but remember capitalization and everything. It can really make a difference.
Maxim1986
12/14/18, 1:07 AM
Also i love how servile the narrator has become. Make him ever more pathetically eager to please his new master, even as part of him remembers his studly old self.
david
12/14/18, 12:55 AM
Yes! Hot hot story! Great idea! Regarding rubberchap's wish, i had a similar thought. i suspect Jackson will not be able to restrain himself from trying to use the remote on Jordan again. i imagine Jordan putting the pieces together and tracking Jackson down to investigate his suspicion and ultimately for some pay-back. Jordan might even use the device to dominate and perhaps enslave Jackson and others using hypnosis and the remote together to train and control his new acolytes. i am definitely hoping for more additions to the story. So happy to have found you here on this site. i hadn't run into your stories on tumblr. Have you advertised your move to here on tumblr yet?