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Dec 12, 2018
Anonymous
12/12/18, 10:57 PM
Disappointed to see pics in general and hope the new feature doesn't spread too much - feels lazy. The writing itself should create the image imo
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
12/12/18, 10:55 PM
thank you for the reply
Dec 12, 2018
Anonymous
12/12/18, 10:47 PM
As to the previous comment about not capitalizing sentences and phrases and sentences, it was because he had turned dumb. The writer was putting an emphasis on it. A different style lets say, to highlight the fact that he had changed.
TheD
12/12/18, 10:42 PM
Such a terrific series of ideas. Thanks for the stories, MasterJerker! You've clearly had a lot of fun with this. I hope at some point we get to learn how the scrolls keep showing up out of nowhere. ALSO, you either wrote yourself into the story in fifth-to-the-last paragraph, in the second sentence, or you switched from third-person narrator to first-person narrator accidentally. Keep writing: this is really getting good. Suggestion: The Editor finds an unwitting powered individual who, in small ways, makes daydreams come to life for passers-by. The Editor could twist and augment this ability until anyone that comes near him starts experiencing their favorite erotic fantasy. Is that super now a hero or a villain?
codypony@aol.com
12/12/18, 10:36 PM
Oh Yeah. Forced. Rubber. Black. Transformed. Satisfaction. *happy sigh*
12/12/18, 9:59 PM
I liked this story. But don't like the suggestion of sharing partners when Tony gets all alpha male on them. I hope you change that. But other than that I loved it.
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
12/12/18, 9:28 PM
*presses button waiting for elevator*
Dec 12, 2018
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
12/12/18, 9:26 PM
I see a party & this stuff is in a punch bowl. By end of night every guy is a beef cake. I want some!!!!!
alienlenny@yahoo.com
12/12/18, 9:06 PM
a nice twist for change.
12/12/18, 9:05 PM
Holy shit... I didn't see the twist with Todd taking both shots coming at all. Amazing twist - I'm so nervous for what's gonna happen next. I'm so stoked that Theo and Todd are getting together. I just hope Todd's (permenant!) transformation doesn't kill it. Also, I laughed my ass off when the clear plastic divider became a plot point again.