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joaopomilio@hotmail.com
12/12/18, 10:55 PM
thank you for the reply
Dec 12, 2018
Anonymous
12/12/18, 10:47 PM
As to the previous comment about not capitalizing sentences and phrases and sentences, it was because he had turned dumb. The writer was putting an emphasis on it. A different style lets say, to highlight the fact that he had changed.
TheD
12/12/18, 10:42 PM
Such a terrific series of ideas. Thanks for the stories, MasterJerker! You've clearly had a lot of fun with this. I hope at some point we get to learn how the scrolls keep showing up out of nowhere. ALSO, you either wrote yourself into the story in fifth-to-the-last paragraph, in the second sentence, or you switched from third-person narrator to first-person narrator accidentally. Keep writing: this is really getting good. Suggestion: The Editor finds an unwitting powered individual who, in small ways, makes daydreams come to life for passers-by. The Editor could twist and augment this ability until anyone that comes near him starts experiencing their favorite erotic fantasy. Is that super now a hero or a villain?
codypony@aol.com
12/12/18, 10:36 PM
Oh Yeah. Forced. Rubber. Black. Transformed. Satisfaction. *happy sigh*
12/12/18, 9:59 PM
I liked this story. But don't like the suggestion of sharing partners when Tony gets all alpha male on them. I hope you change that. But other than that I loved it.
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
12/12/18, 9:28 PM
*presses button waiting for elevator*
Dec 12, 2018
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
12/12/18, 9:26 PM
I see a party & this stuff is in a punch bowl. By end of night every guy is a beef cake. I want some!!!!!
alienlenny@yahoo.com
12/12/18, 9:06 PM
a nice twist for change.
12/12/18, 9:05 PM
Holy shit... I didn't see the twist with Todd taking both shots coming at all. Amazing twist - I'm so nervous for what's gonna happen next. I'm so stoked that Theo and Todd are getting together. I just hope Todd's (permenant!) transformation doesn't kill it. Also, I laughed my ass off when the clear plastic divider became a plot point again.
Bmax
12/12/18, 8:28 PM
Tomozco, Like to series so far. Love the lack of control and automatic behaviour of the two evolving slaves. Would like to see less foot stuff and more MM sex, mind control and StoG conversion and lack of control of slaves. What about some rubber added and others dragged into service as the club gathers more "recruits" or slaves should I say. Can't wait for upcoming episodes. I know quality takes time and that is what you always put out.