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Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
12/12/18, 9:28 PM
*presses button waiting for elevator*
Dec 12, 2018
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
12/12/18, 9:26 PM
I see a party & this stuff is in a punch bowl. By end of night every guy is a beef cake. I want some!!!!!
alienlenny@yahoo.com
12/12/18, 9:06 PM
a nice twist for change.
12/12/18, 9:05 PM
Holy shit... I didn't see the twist with Todd taking both shots coming at all. Amazing twist - I'm so nervous for what's gonna happen next. I'm so stoked that Theo and Todd are getting together. I just hope Todd's (permenant!) transformation doesn't kill it. Also, I laughed my ass off when the clear plastic divider became a plot point again.
Bmax
12/12/18, 8:28 PM
Tomozco, Like to series so far. Love the lack of control and automatic behaviour of the two evolving slaves. Would like to see less foot stuff and more MM sex, mind control and StoG conversion and lack of control of slaves. What about some rubber added and others dragged into service as the club gathers more "recruits" or slaves should I say. Can't wait for upcoming episodes. I know quality takes time and that is what you always put out.
12/12/18, 8:26 PM
To joaopomilio@hotmail.com's question, more than likely in the confines of this world expers would be put under the category of supers. so they could be affected as well, though they'd likely be able to push back with their mental prowess.
Anonymous
12/12/18, 7:57 PM
I love to more of the good guys turn evil, and the changes that occur mentally. And dumbing down is also hot!
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
12/12/18, 6:40 PM
one more thing, does the Editor's power work on people with supernatural powers or Espers?
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
12/12/18, 6:30 PM
also, I love your sense of humor too
Bibimbap
12/12/18, 6:15 PM
Hello again, MasterJerker! Man, thank you very, very much for consider and use my suggestions. I knew that a follow up was going to be great, but this exceeds my wildest expectations. It's insanely hot, and I LOVE IT SO MUCH. The change of Hydration into the raunchy Yellowwater is fantastic. I love the degradation of his heroic figure, how filthy he becomes in mind and body, and how ridiculous he is now as Yellowwater. What a filthy lame excuse of a hero Parshall Hexton is now! (and the 'hero' jailed for being such a pervert in public is something I never imagined , ha, ha!) The dumbing down was a hot touch, I didn't mentioned before, but a superhero becoming dumb as you've made him, is something that turns me on. You wrote it perfectly, and I thank you so much for it. There's something that I like about your writing: you see, I imagine Hydration all pretty face and clean cut, then he's transformed and he's still handsome, but with a dumb expression, disheveled, unkempt and scruffy. But your description of the situation is so good that it doesn't need further descriptions, is easy to assume thing based on what you said and that's something pretty cool in your work, I like that so much. I like that you're putting some restrictions to Editor, how his powers works and the backstory of the characters that you're making, is far more entertaining and interesting to read, and makes me want to know more. By the way, I like your sense of humor. "Marital status: Married to his right hand*" made me laugh a lot. I like the idea of Ray Jenks, people with powers that they don't use and remain as civilians, is a curious concept and a very smart idea. The change on Papa Ray and Elastic Stretch was very hot too, I hope you go deeper on them (or better said, that Papa Ray go deeper into Elastic Stretch's ass, ha, ha!). Keep writing, please, this is going wonderfully!