Recent Comments

Dec 12, 2018
Anonymous
12/12/18, 3:50 PM
I'm going to be the scrooge. This was a great story that has so much potential. I can see future episodes where friends drink 'The Drink' and live their lives at the gym. However --- the writing sucked. Sentences with no caps. Sentences with no punctuation. Phrases masquerading as sentences. I had to read it three times to make sure I didn't misunderstand what was being said. Rozza, keep writing, but please run a spell check, grammar check, anything check before you post. The better writers on this site will tell you: writing must include editing.
12/12/18, 3:38 PM
Definitely another hot chapter. I think a good switcheroo would be figuring out how to get Stan to use the app to make Dave and James into super dominant tops that fuck and a whole bunch of other eager bottoms.
Anonymous
12/12/18, 3:09 PM
awesome
Anonymous
12/12/18, 3:05 PM
so well written and hot... will enjoy reading part 2!!!
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
12/12/18, 3:02 PM
I like bad guy with shades of gray, on the Editor's case, I'm proposing the desire for a family to call his own, not that he would admit it out loud
Anonymous
12/12/18, 2:58 PM
so hot... can't wait for part 3...
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
12/12/18, 2:42 PM
I have a suggestion: a young aspiring hero with healing power get turned int the adoptive son of the Editor and Lightningstrikes, he keeps his healing powers, but can also manipulate the hormones of the others, besides healing, a Support for the Damage-dealing Lighting and to the Thinker Editor, and a hero with the ability to turn his skin into stone, after been turned into the family's butler, with the villain codename "Rock Hard"
Anonymous
12/12/18, 2:15 PM
amazing, please add more chapters i love your writing so
Dec 8, 2018
Anonymous
12/12/18, 1:55 PM
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Cadek
12/12/18, 1:38 PM
Not the biggest fan of watersports but Papa Ray is super hot and the struggles with the reality edits are make this a very intriguing story. Can't wait to read more.