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BlindSeer0
12/11/18, 4:14 PM
Pierce is really good at making really bad decisions. You'd think he'd be better about handling Maripossa at this point, but you'd be wrong. Hopefully this doesn't ruin anything for Todd, O, or Derek (and i guess Charles/Blu but it's harder to feel bad for him).
Anonymous
12/11/18, 4:05 PM
more please!
12/11/18, 3:23 PM
great story. hope smaller bottom gets muscled up and every one gets to 25% or 50% to mix up sexs fun.
dirk
12/11/18, 3:10 PM
make him even more of a twink......grow his hair really long
Anonymous
12/11/18, 2:43 PM
I volunteer myself to make many many uniforms. :3
nycboot
12/11/18, 2:30 PM
I've already commented multiple times on the wonderful characters you have produced especially Pierce. This is the chapter where Todd comes into his own and it's great. But what's even greater is your idea: Derek and Charles had to have Mariposa in order to wake up to who they are. Todd (and O) don't need that kind of stimulus. It's a very nice narrative parallelism you've created and it makes Todd's story all the more intriguing and satisfying. And again, how you come up with the stuff Pierce says, like “How’d he get through customs, smuggling that banana and those pomegranates?” is an ever-stimulating way of creating and maintaining character, especially if a reader thinks you have no more tricks up your sleeve. Bravo!
Anonymous
12/11/18, 1:41 PM
Ahí is actually a word, but you're right, here it's "ay" :-P
NZcontroller
12/11/18, 12:41 PM
would have been awesome if he did cum on the pizza and eat it. Maybe on the next chapter.. say that the pizza guy, when running away, just gave away the pizza to Andy. So then he'll pass it on to Brandon.. then making brandon cum on the pizza and eat it infront of Andy. That'll be so hot !
Hypnojockpup1234
12/11/18, 11:55 AM
enjoyed this chapter even more
LongtimeFan
12/11/18, 11:53 AM
What an incredible new chapter! I'm SO glad Todd gets someone who loves him--and it looks as though he's about to permanently transform...as for Derek and Blu, I wonder what will happen when the former finally learns about his husband's own Mariposa mix? You have such a gift. Thanks for always writing such super stories!