Recent Comments

12/10/18, 1:36 PM
So, where is that creek and waterfall? I will keep an eye out for it the next time I go for a hike in the woods. This is such a cool story.
Anonymous
12/10/18, 1:28 PM
what about the next hero be a young one, and he becomes the "son" to those
jeep4191@gmail.com
12/10/18, 1:24 PM
I'm not finished with this character (or Dozer and Bubba) You will, i hope be happy with part 3 for momentary clarity as things begin to escalate
12/10/18, 1:15 PM
This gives a new interpretation to "Bite Me!" Good thing everyone got to claim him. That would be quite a welcome to a club.
LongtimeFan
12/10/18, 1:12 PM
I second the above comments! Not only is this an amazing hot story, but slowly watching heroes become hypnotized and evil has always been a huge turn on for me (Smallville's Red K episodes, Spider-Man 3)...mmm, mmm. Amazing stuff!
Anonymous
12/10/18, 1:01 PM
that is a hot idea, changing heroes into villains
Anonymous
12/10/18, 12:49 PM
so, I assume this is a series, Am I right?
Hypnojockpup1234
12/10/18, 11:59 AM
please continue
Anonymous
12/10/18, 11:58 AM
love it, only kinda wish at half way he notices he's not himself and can't stop now, and is almost forcibly taken over as this new muscle being
CigarDipperCop
12/10/18, 11:57 AM
fuckin HOT!! i just jacked a huge load with a fat dip of cope imagining them all smokin cigars getting hairier and bearded! fuck yea!