Recent Comments

10/20/24, 1:20 AM
Love the bottom sub dad twist at the end. Looking forward to more.
Nov 17, 2023
10/20/24, 12:45 AM
A very interesting concept/start…..would like to know more…..
10/19/24, 11:48 PM
An excellent chapter. One more boy err Cop turned.
10/19/24, 10:51 PM
I really hope you continue, I keep rereading!
10/19/24, 9:53 PM
It's hard to see why people are so surprised or bent out of shape. It's porn, so it's highly idealized. But even real Doms can and do throw us (subs) away all the time and swap us for younger, fitter ones. Doms in the community are few, and they're in demand. Us subs are many, replaceable, and expendable. If you are a sub who lives to middle age (like me) you'll learn that. In this fantasy, the sub is mind-controlled in a complete way that can only happen in a fantasy so he isn't heartsick about being dumped after 30. It ties up a loose end in a way that never happens in reality. Being happy while also still being used is part of the fantasy.
Anonymous
10/19/24, 8:03 PM
Damn this series is amazing. Really hope you continue it
HypnoMutt
10/19/24, 3:08 AM
"NGL you had me in the first half..." You'd teased dark but I had _no_ idea. Just wow. Powerful, muscular, and brutal. I'll confess that Ryan's turn strikes me as too dark too quickly. No knock on your portrayal or plot intended at all; this is subjective. I'm keyed into the concept of Ryan as benevolent-non-consensual manipulator in the story so far, and although there are ethical/moral flaws in his character and conduct, they don't seem to me to have enough evil mojo on their own to accomplish this deep, complete corruption we see here. What would make me buy it? Maybe seeing growing signs of how profoundly damaged and hurt he is, how his sense of rejection/humiliation/betrayal/failure has festered in his spirit for years, as Ryan's resentment takes charge and in its own way asserts control over him as relentlessly as he controls others. I could riff on this more, but you can see my train of thought. I may be jumping the gun as you've got two other scenarios coming up that could change my perception with additional context, so please take this with a grain of salt. Thanks as always - your work is a highlight of my kink life!

10/19/24, 5:45 PM
@[HypnoMutt](/user/show/10023035) and @[SirD](/user/show/946083) Thanks for the comments. This is an interesting conversation to have, but I think maybe one for me not to comment on until after all the endings are posted (2nd one written and being edited now, 3rd one about 50% written. Goal is to have at least one done by Nov. 1, and both by Nov. 8.) I have so much I want to say about Ryan and Michael, but again, I'm going to wait until everything is posted. Maybe we can have a discussion then.
10/19/24, 5:24 PM
Loved this, written so well!