Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/6/18, 8:40 PM
Sexy hot story !
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
12/6/18, 6:45 PM
is this part one?
ForgottenCradle
12/6/18, 1:20 PM
simply amazing
ForgottenCradle
12/6/18, 1:11 PM
that twist had to happen and I loved it. great chapter
ForgottenCradle
12/6/18, 12:56 PM
love love LOVE the concept
Glenny Boi
12/6/18, 5:41 AM
i am loving this story :-) the more chapters the better i say . Steve can practice on me if he wants ha ha
Anonymous
12/6/18, 5:01 AM
I'm not sure where you're going, but I'm enjoying the ride. Hot!!!
Willie Cici
12/6/18, 5:00 AM
Google Translate. I'm sure it's not accurate, but it was the best I could do. As for the comment as not understanding, I tried to explain the context of the conversation in the action of the story. That was my intent. As always, thanks for the input. I (like all the other writers on this site) value the constructive comments that people leave. It helps in my writing and editing.
Anonymous
12/6/18, 4:56 AM
I enjoyed this entire series. Pics were hot, but story was interesting.