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12/5/18, 7:48 PM
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allabouttheeyes@yandex.com
12/5/18, 7:46 PM
Thanks for the comments. I'm glad you're enjoying. @ForgottenCradle, it does seem that way. That's the thing though, it's not so much about the destination as the journey. Each instance that Steve is hypnotizing someone, he is getting some practice in. He's also getting getting to hone his social engineering skills. While Brendan is the target, he's a bit of a whale in his eyes. While he could try just approaching him head on, this is a guy who wants to make sure he does it right and is confident when the time comes. In regards to bringing the story further sexually, it's an idea but it wasn't really something I was going to do yet. That said, it might be nice for Steve to have all of his new slaves in one place. For me, the induction has always been the hottest part of a story.
12/5/18, 7:21 PM
Thanks so much, guys. <3
Anonymous
12/5/18, 5:55 PM
Hot story !
ForgottenCradle
12/5/18, 5:01 PM
at this rate he'll hypnotize the whole school before he gets Brendan
ForgottenCradle
12/5/18, 4:55 PM
best chapter,yet. love that he went under with a smile
ForgottenCradle
12/5/18, 4:45 PM
love to see where this goes
ForgottenCradle
12/5/18, 4:44 PM
really good start of a series. gonna read them all in one go now
Anonymous
12/5/18, 3:48 PM
Great story!!! Loved it!!!!
Anonymous
12/5/18, 2:52 PM
Love the concept! I could definitely read multiple stories in a series and never get bored. I like your pacing, too. Could use just a bit more embellishing in the racy parts, though.