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Anonymous
10/19/24, 8:03 PM
Damn this series is amazing. Really hope you continue it
HypnoMutt
10/19/24, 3:08 AM
"NGL you had me in the first half..." You'd teased dark but I had _no_ idea. Just wow. Powerful, muscular, and brutal. I'll confess that Ryan's turn strikes me as too dark too quickly. No knock on your portrayal or plot intended at all; this is subjective. I'm keyed into the concept of Ryan as benevolent-non-consensual manipulator in the story so far, and although there are ethical/moral flaws in his character and conduct, they don't seem to me to have enough evil mojo on their own to accomplish this deep, complete corruption we see here. What would make me buy it? Maybe seeing growing signs of how profoundly damaged and hurt he is, how his sense of rejection/humiliation/betrayal/failure has festered in his spirit for years, as Ryan's resentment takes charge and in its own way asserts control over him as relentlessly as he controls others. I could riff on this more, but you can see my train of thought. I may be jumping the gun as you've got two other scenarios coming up that could change my perception with additional context, so please take this with a grain of salt. Thanks as always - your work is a highlight of my kink life!

10/19/24, 5:45 PM
@[HypnoMutt](/user/show/10023035) and @[SirD](/user/show/946083) Thanks for the comments. This is an interesting conversation to have, but I think maybe one for me not to comment on until after all the endings are posted (2nd one written and being edited now, 3rd one about 50% written. Goal is to have at least one done by Nov. 1, and both by Nov. 8.) I have so much I want to say about Ryan and Michael, but again, I'm going to wait until everything is posted. Maybe we can have a discussion then.
10/19/24, 5:24 PM
Loved this, written so well!
10/19/24, 4:10 PM
Wow! Yet another amazing chapter! I have to say that this chapter contained one of the most creative glorochlorm scenes I've ever read! :rofl: And while I'm happy that Finn is open about his kinks, I'm concerned that Rosenwave is bringing him (and, perhaps, Kian) back under his power. Elijah's power seems a bit terrifying, but I'm sure it will come in handy as the Fiends try to take over the world. I'm intrigued that he is so possessive of Nick, our newly recruited chemist. Did his undercover recruiting operation go a bit too far? Will Zach and Will find Mikey and Kai? Will Zach open up to Will? I really liked the set up of this chapter with scenes from most of the different plot lines. That really kept everything moving. As always, I can't wait for the next installment!!
Anonymous
10/19/24, 3:50 PM
Makes me wanna be in the same situation as Connor! So hot, unreal! 🥵
TheOne
10/19/24, 10:45 AM
Good to see you back again!! Like the toy on the homophobe good one :3

10/19/24, 3:20 PM
@[TheOne](/user/show/10018186) Thank you for the warm welcome back! :)
10/19/24, 3:09 PM
Loving the rough, degrading vibes here, piss and rough sex and absolute dominance in spite of getting fucked. Such a versatile story and vibe. I may not be into chastity, but everything else is so good.
Anonymous
10/19/24, 3:09 PM
Cool idea but the writing could improve, feels very descriptive but hollow
10/19/24, 2:27 PM
Wish this series was finished!! Uugh