Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/4/18, 6:14 PM
Ugh. Don't even get me started on Tumblr's nonsense. Anyway! This was pretty hot, and the writing was really good. Definitely looking forward to more from you. Loved this.
LongtimeFan
12/4/18, 5:57 PM
Hi! Just wanted to say that I LOVE these stories. Slow, sleep-inducing, "traditional" hypnosis has always been a huge turn-on for me. I especially like the images of the hunks with slack jaws and fluttering eyelids...mmmm. Thanks for a great series! :)
Axel
12/4/18, 4:27 PM
Damn what a hot story! I love a good betrayal story but I'm sure Brucie is happier as a twink now! and I agree with the last comment, I would love to see this into a series. Maybe Nightwing goes after Superman and Superboy making them into submissive bottom Musclesluts? I can see Heroes and Villains being turned into a different selections if hot fun. but either way BeardedBard I hope you continue writing stories because this one was hot, whether you continue this series on or not!
Boston Satyr
12/4/18, 11:41 AM
Poor Tumblr :-(
Anonymous
12/4/18, 11:36 AM
Your transformations are hot but I missed the point of changing someone so they have absolutely no memory of themselves or of the transformation process. It's like one person simply ceases to be and another person appears.
Anonymous
12/4/18, 11:20 AM
hope more stories like this to come
Anonymous
12/4/18, 10:28 AM
this is so good. characters are well written. as much as like to see anal sex and extreme domination going on, I think keeping the characters true to their personality makes it very realistic and very hot . also the descriptive explanation of their power is so good and well written. thank you for this xx
12/4/18, 8:48 AM
It's funny you say that. My personal writing challenge for this one was to not write from the sub's perspective exactly because it's what I usually do.
Anonymous
12/4/18, 7:26 AM
another great chapter! I'm usually way more into reading stories from the sub's point of view, and yet this still got me going. Testament to how strong of a writer you are, man
Anonymous
12/4/18, 6:53 AM
Amazing! You're a great writer and this is a great little series you're building up. Keen to read more!