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Anonymous
12/3/18, 12:06 AM
would definitely be hot to see the two develop their relationship. especially their inner monologues coming to terms with their new identities. i can see this being really hot for derek as his thoughts start to turn "gay" and even wonder if he actually wants to be straight again maybe derek can get out of being a bottom by finding another witch who tells him he can regain his freedom by tracking down the perpetrators and turning them into bottoms by cumming in them. once they are all bottoms, he must perform a ritual where he offers these bottoms to a demon to regain his straightness, but must not be seduced by the demon himself or risj becoming a slave himself. thoughts anyway. great story. hope more follows.
paisaguerro
12/2/18, 9:57 PM
Thanks guys. Nah, no team... but there is some revenge about to happen.
Anonymous
12/2/18, 8:57 PM
Excellent
luke phalen
12/2/18, 3:19 PM
I've been waiting for this, thanks!
Anonymous
12/2/18, 2:49 PM
Great conversion story.Next comes his team.
Anonymous
12/2/18, 2:06 PM
At first I was really rooting for Derek and Charles to get back together, but now I hope that Derek will leave Pierce and Charles in his Blu persona in Cancun. I would think Blu would be happier for it, and Derek deserve better than either of those two, who lied and manipulated him the entire trip.
nycboot
12/2/18, 1:57 PM
I still find Pierce the most interesting person in this episode and story. He's so flamboyant - which one usually equates with being transparent. But he's very mysterious. We know he's a Native American and yet absolutely nothing he does seems to have any connection with his cultural background (other than the description of his long dark hair in this chapter). At the outset of the story I felt more connection with Derek than with Charles. Now I'm feeling the reverse - that Charles is learning how to enjoy life (through his alter-self Blu) and that Derek is worrying too much to be enjoyable. I see you're finally allowing Todd to have more character. Maybe Pierce shouldn't have given Todd the six-pack - he might have needed it more. In any case, this is still an amazing story with the characterizations so well thought out. Thank you!
Cigardave
12/2/18, 1:37 PM
fuckin hot!
Anonymous
12/2/18, 5:07 AM
This was incredible. I knew it would be. I saw the author's name. Incredible! I'm still hard.