Recent Comments

nycboot
12/2/18, 1:57 PM
I still find Pierce the most interesting person in this episode and story. He's so flamboyant - which one usually equates with being transparent. But he's very mysterious. We know he's a Native American and yet absolutely nothing he does seems to have any connection with his cultural background (other than the description of his long dark hair in this chapter). At the outset of the story I felt more connection with Derek than with Charles. Now I'm feeling the reverse - that Charles is learning how to enjoy life (through his alter-self Blu) and that Derek is worrying too much to be enjoyable. I see you're finally allowing Todd to have more character. Maybe Pierce shouldn't have given Todd the six-pack - he might have needed it more. In any case, this is still an amazing story with the characterizations so well thought out. Thank you!
Cigardave
12/2/18, 1:37 PM
fuckin hot!
Anonymous
12/2/18, 5:07 AM
This was incredible. I knew it would be. I saw the author's name. Incredible! I'm still hard.
KinkDawg
12/2/18, 4:13 AM
HOLY COW! WHERE DID YOU GET TRANS GENDER?!? DONT COMMENT IF YOU DIDNT READ IT. I AGREE THOUGH. LESS ABOUT THE WOMEN EVEN THOUGH THEYRE BAIT. SPOILER ALERT: HE BECOMES THE WHORE IN THE SLING.
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
12/2/18, 2:01 AM
tg? That is certainly a major turn off for me.
LongNskinny
12/2/18, 1:12 AM
i liked it, but I also get off on watching men fuck women. i just watch the men
stroppy Author
12/2/18, 1:08 AM
A shame because everything that she was and did, he became.
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
12/2/18, 12:45 AM
Would be better if it was all guys. That female wrecks mood, I didn't finish reading it.
Daniel
12/1/18, 9:26 PM
One helluva story, congrats dude...I.J.S.