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BeardedBard@protonmail.com
12/1/18, 3:08 AM
Many thanks for the feedback! I just sent an updated version to our Admin!
EJG
12/1/18, 12:14 AM
Damned hot.. Whore Batboi out to the whole of Gothams horny male populace. But,i agree,paragraph breaks should help in any potential next chapter?
Boston Satyr
11/30/18, 11:26 PM
any new stories from Mr. Djinn?
Max
11/30/18, 11:24 PM
You’re my new favorite writer on here. Part 1 pushed every single one of my buttons, and now Part 2 has been even better. First off, I love how you have kept Jace as narrator but made him the agent of other men’s transition into faggotry. His total corruption is super hot, despite what other comments have been made. I love the hilarious little touches you add, I.e. Eddie mooning over Bradley Cooper in ASIB and Jace becoming a devoted Hillary fan. This is one of the funniest stories I’ve read in addition to the hottest. I can’t wait to see what fate Jace has in mind for his son. I’d love to see the son become a total sissy twink boi, maybe with a huge daddy fetish that Jace can help him fulfill. In Part 1 you mentioned the son going to a Yankee game - maybe post-transformation his interest in sports turns to pathetic faggy lust for all jocks? And how will the new, improved Eddie figure in the son’s transformation? Maybe after enrolling in cosmetology school Eddie can help with the son’s makeover. I hope they both become best girlfriends doing each other’s nails and giggling over how hot their muscle daddy Jace is. If you want to trade ideas email me at maxim1986@yahoo.com.😉
Boston Satyr
11/30/18, 11:19 PM
Paragraphs. Please use paragraphs. I tried to read, but it got too exhausting. The brain needs pauses. Paragraphs.
KAKameron
11/30/18, 11:07 PM
hmm i think its deeper than the status quo. I read this as an illusion spell of sorts. all keith sees are muscle men, maybe they look normal. all the men probably see keith as an adonis but he's normal too. the fact that all these men turned out to be bottoms- isn't that how it usually is? alway loved your work CHAOTICDJINN
Anonymous
11/30/18, 9:49 PM
just terrific great premise thanks!!
Anonymous
11/30/18, 8:34 PM
The mental regression is nice! Would enjoy more.
11/30/18, 8:20 PM
Is this going to be continued? I really hope so!
Anonymous
11/30/18, 6:04 PM
Arg! Ten days without a new installment! I'm having the Mariposa withdrawl jitters!