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10/18/24, 8:43 AM
Wow. I really loved your story, it was super hot! Hope you don't mind, but it got me thinking, and I couldn’t help but imagine how I might have pictured a part a bit differently. For example, I might have made Ed's transformation more gradual. If I were him, right after discovering the puppets, I would've gone home with my wife. Over the next few days, I wouldn't be able to stop thinking about Mike, at first, with disgust. Slowly, that disgust would turn into fascination, and eventually, into desire. To my surprise, the thought of growing a beard started turning me on, so I stopped shaving, much to my wife's frustration. My beard grew faster and thicker than ever before, and even though I'd never let it grow for more than a few days, the idea of having a full beard and a moustache that completely covered my mouth stuck in my head. Every day, more hair appeared on my body, and I couldn't wait for the morning to see new places where I was getting hairier. I also couldn't stop stroking my beard, enjoying the feeling as it grew. The longer it got, the more turned on I became. Ever since I came back, I'd lost all desire for my wife and found myself thinking more about Mike. And about Wayne's moustache. After a month, things with my wife would've become unbearable. We'd separate. I was unrecognizable. Looking in the mirror, I couldn't help but get aroused. My beard had grown down to my chest, thick and dense, rising high on my cheeks. My walrus mustache completely hid my lips, and my body was covered in thick, soft hair. I'd go back to Mike and Wayne... Hope you don’t mind me sharing my thoughts. Honestly, your version is so compelling, and I’m just sharing this because it really turned me on and totally hit my kink. You’ve definitely become my favorite writer here. Sorry if my English isn’t perfect, I’m from Spain :) Cheers!

10/19/24, 1:44 AM
@[Pabloso](/user/show/425035) That is a fantastic idea! I’m sorry I didn’t think of it! Thank you so much for reading and I always enjoy hearing what people enjoy and how I could improve! I agree with Beardfull1, I think you should give writing a try!
10/19/24, 1:02 AM
Damn... Does that mean we get a follow up for this? Nice.
John
10/19/24, 12:39 AM
the hottest story
Anonymous
10/19/24, 12:18 AM
Hope for more wedgies
Anonymous
10/19/24, 12:17 AM
This was hot and I can't wait to see what happens next!!
10/18/24, 9:53 PM
I just want to say that I love this story and I’m so desperate for a sequel. I want to see what him getting pregnant is like. Does it take 9 months like in real life or does the transformation happen faster? How does it he deal with it? Fuck it’s so hot
10/18/24, 6:48 PM
So the attempt at defiance resulted in getting crushed hard. It would be delightfully twisted if the alternate ending where Mike tries to unequivocally submit ends up in him winning instead, although admittedly that would require something really odd to happen.

StalkerInTheShadow
10/18/24, 9:38 PM
@[anarchomegalomaniac](/user/show/907794) Mike had been crushed hard, as you have said. Though, I don't think he truly lost and Ryan truly won either. The ending showed that Mike had been right about Ryan knowing no love, and thus Ryan may have lots of fuck-toys but none of love, only attention deliberately demanded but no affection willingly given, and ended up still get envious and bitter at those who have it (such as Chip and Trevor).
10/18/24, 8:06 PM
I hope you’ll consider continuing this exceptionally hot story! I am eager to see where the characters go from here! Thank you for writing it!
10/18/24, 3:10 AM
It’s another amazing Chapter 😳😳🥵🥵 like REALLY amazing . Please don’t worry about taking time . Hehe I imagine the new substance is like the one used in your first ever story where it could be made of a cocktail of the soaked sweat rigged out of the feinds socks hehe or something similar 😳😳😳😵‍💫 maybe they have a stock of bottles and one of the characters asks what’s in it hehe

10/18/24, 7:49 PM
@[Glennyboi](/user/show/917433) Glad you like it :blush: The new substance can honestly be anything. It pretty much has the effects of chloroform as it is portrayed in movies and tv shows, rather than what it actually does in real life. That's what the main issue was.
Takanashi
10/18/24, 5:25 PM
I can't believe I was the first to read this, I kept updating every so often hoping to find a new chapter, everything was perfect from start to finish, it was a very good closing chapter, very exciting. I came away thinking a lot about Mike and how he became a senseless slave. I hope to read more of your stories or who knows, if you dare to release alternate chapters. I was left thinking about what it would be like if Ryan ended up falling into his own game or if in the end he and Mike accidentally ended up being slaves of a third.