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Anonymous
11/30/18, 3:16 AM
I love it ! I came three times reading this. Thank you so much for your writing. Please do more! Can you please do something along the lines of a guy hating an act but having no choice but to do it as it is the "law" or something. Like Ian's dad having to serve Desmond, a pudgy smelly kid, with his body as that is how guests are treated. LIke what you did with the first cop in "re-educator" with his inspections. He hates sucking cocks cuz he is straight but that is the inspection procedure. Just a suggestion. Tho anything you write will make me nut. xx Love you lots !
tomozco
11/30/18, 1:20 AM
This is just so HOT! Another wonderful piece, Edlam! Love the smell obsession and oblivion of the family. Any chance for another part about more actions of the Hawking family or perhaps Ian? Or Desmond could revisit one of his past families (one that he has left them aware of their perversions)? The feet suggestion would be cool too. Anyway, good work as usual! Still looking forward to your continuation on the Re-Educator and Retirement series!
Marktree6
11/30/18, 12:10 AM
Loved it man! Two Greek gods toying with a cocky clever mortal!
Marktree6
11/30/18, 12:00 AM
Awesome as always bro! I love your stories set in bars. More hot topless bartenders
Anonymous
11/29/18, 10:42 PM
It was an interesting twist to just change their home life and let the dad keep his job, plus the unaware part was pretty hot. It might have been interesting if at the end Desmond made them remember just long enough for them to be horrified at what they had become before reverting them back.
UchihaDEMS
11/29/18, 10:27 PM
Yes, feet would be a nice add! Also, if you dont want to make a sequel, you can make a prequel about how he fucked up his own family <3
Anonymous
11/29/18, 8:41 PM
Great story!! I see a series. Can't wait!!
Anonymous
11/29/18, 8:31 PM
Clever. I liked it!!
nycboot
11/29/18, 8:23 PM
Look at Victor Hugo's Les Misérables: he stopped when it felt right. Sometimes the ample background and context makes the sex and other arousing portions even more arousing. :)
mgreene70@yahoo.com
11/29/18, 8:00 PM
Thank you nycboot - as always I feel humbled by your praise. I agree with you actually that parts of the story were slightly rushed - particularly part 10. As I rounded the story off I began to think that maybe I should have teased out Todd's transformation into a zombie in more detail. Then I wondered about actually telling the story of how Lucien seduced the factory-owner's son in the 1790s and got hold of all his money... The problem with stories like this which have a historical sweep is that it's hard to know when to stop.