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11/28/18, 9:01 PM
Totally understand not covering Tucker's changes in this story, but definitely found myself curious about the evolution of Tucker and Blake's feelings about each other as the night went on. Kind of a single-night version of one of my favorites of your stories, "The Birthday Gift": https://www.gayspiralstories.com/newStory/show/1172
Daniel
11/28/18, 8:55 PM
I really liked the detail in the hypnosis process, and corruption is always HOT I.J.S.
Daniel
11/28/18, 8:34 PM
Corruption , hypnosis, incest, straight to gay ? I always say if you're gonna do it, go all the way...righteous dude ! I.J.S.
Anonymous
11/28/18, 7:48 PM
Wow! Would love to read more!
11/28/18, 7:42 PM
Great start, and I love the Kafka homage!
Anonymous
11/28/18, 7:02 PM
Great story. Love to see his inhibition slowly melting away until he loved men ! Can almost imagine the evening that have after they left the bar ;)
nycboot
11/28/18, 6:59 PM
Hey M. Greene. Sorry I've not been able to provide more feedback previously - my computer died recently so I've not been able to read your story until yesterday. It's fabulous so far. I love the scene with the wax doll and the magic and watching Marc's gradual transformation into Antoine. The scene above that concludes chapter 9 is particularly wonderful and so arousing. Glad to see you're back! Bravo to all your work!
firesix
11/28/18, 6:06 PM
๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘€๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘€๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘€๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘€๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘€ good shit goเฑฆิ sHit๐Ÿ‘Œ thats โœ” some good๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œshit right๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œthere๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ rightโœ”there โœ”โœ”if i do ฦฝaาฏ so my self ๐Ÿ’ฏ i say so ๐Ÿ’ฏ thats what im talking about right there right there (chorus: สณแถฆแตสฐแต— แต—สฐแต‰สณแต‰) mMMMMแŽทะœ๐Ÿ’ฏ ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ ๐Ÿ‘ŒะO0ะžเฌ OOOOOะžเฌ เฌ Ooooแต’แต’แต’แต’แต’แต’แต’แต’แต’๐Ÿ‘Œ ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ ๐Ÿ‘Œ ๐Ÿ’ฏ ๐Ÿ‘Œ ๐Ÿ‘€ ๐Ÿ‘€ ๐Ÿ‘€ ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘ŒGood shit
Derek Williams
11/28/18, 6:06 PM
@Veridian - You nailed it. I mean, he would have ended up gay, but not the walking caricature that Jeff got transformed info. @Cris - I thought about putting in the other POVs, but I didnโ€™t want to get repetitive with Tucker or give away the magic too fast with Blake. I might revisit this at some point, but no plans for a pt 2 right now.
11/28/18, 5:40 PM
I liked this a lot. SPOILER SPACE To me it seemed like the stereotypes were the point. I can't know what Derek had in mind but it seemed like a straight guy without stereotypical expectations would have walked away unchanged.