Recent Comments

nycboot
11/28/18, 6:59 PM
Hey M. Greene. Sorry I've not been able to provide more feedback previously - my computer died recently so I've not been able to read your story until yesterday. It's fabulous so far. I love the scene with the wax doll and the magic and watching Marc's gradual transformation into Antoine. The scene above that concludes chapter 9 is particularly wonderful and so arousing. Glad to see you're back! Bravo to all your work!
firesix
11/28/18, 6:06 PM
๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘€๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘€๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘€๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘€๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘€ good shit goเฑฆิ sHit๐Ÿ‘Œ thats โœ” some good๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œshit right๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œthere๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ rightโœ”there โœ”โœ”if i do ฦฝaาฏ so my self ๐Ÿ’ฏ i say so ๐Ÿ’ฏ thats what im talking about right there right there (chorus: สณแถฆแตสฐแต— แต—สฐแต‰สณแต‰) mMMMMแŽทะœ๐Ÿ’ฏ ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ ๐Ÿ‘ŒะO0ะžเฌ OOOOOะžเฌ เฌ Ooooแต’แต’แต’แต’แต’แต’แต’แต’แต’๐Ÿ‘Œ ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ ๐Ÿ‘Œ ๐Ÿ’ฏ ๐Ÿ‘Œ ๐Ÿ‘€ ๐Ÿ‘€ ๐Ÿ‘€ ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘ŒGood shit
Derek Williams
11/28/18, 6:06 PM
@Veridian - You nailed it. I mean, he would have ended up gay, but not the walking caricature that Jeff got transformed info. @Cris - I thought about putting in the other POVs, but I didnโ€™t want to get repetitive with Tucker or give away the magic too fast with Blake. I might revisit this at some point, but no plans for a pt 2 right now.
11/28/18, 5:40 PM
I liked this a lot. SPOILER SPACE To me it seemed like the stereotypes were the point. I can't know what Derek had in mind but it seemed like a straight guy without stereotypical expectations would have walked away unchanged.
mgreene70@yahoo.com
11/28/18, 5:39 PM
The story is not quite finished yet - one more episode to come. A huge thanks to all those who have left positive comments here and sent me supportive emails - your feedback is much appreciated and spurs me on to write more.
11/28/18, 5:14 PM
this is perfect jercking off material
Anonymous
11/28/18, 4:52 PM
Ah a man of culture. David Pocock has an ass of a god
Martin
11/28/18, 4:34 PM
wonderful!!!! I'd love to find such a bottom and replace him!
hypnojockpup1234@gmail.com
11/28/18, 3:12 PM
really enjoyed it
Anonymous
11/28/18, 3:07 PM
Terrific story Thanks