Recent Comments

Anonymous
11/27/18, 5:05 PM
You should make a story of how he enslaved his own family...
11/27/18, 4:53 PM
Derek, I'd love to say he definitely will, but I have been struggling for a suitable plot that's sufficiently different to be worth while..
Anonymous
11/27/18, 4:48 PM
I don't get it. Why punish a guy who has no history with other company?
Anonymous
11/27/18, 4:41 PM
hot
11/27/18, 4:13 PM
I hope you reconsider, Symonel, and continue to post here. The weird antagonistic comment thread about Mississippi was an anomaly, and I apologize for adding fuel to the fire there. It's just that, as a fellow writer, I was indignant on your behalf. I've also sometimes had commenters attack me based on something they misread.
Ryan
11/27/18, 3:58 PM
Thanks so much. I am going to try and use Microsoft Word as its able to catch the typos more than Google Docs attempts. I am glad that some are intrigued by the idea so far however and will strive to keep up the good work.
Martin
11/27/18, 3:50 PM
I've just removed those totally unnecessary rant postings about Mississippi. I don't want to read this kind of trash here. Please behave and understand that there's a human being on the other side. Thank you for understanding!
Anonymous
11/27/18, 3:23 PM
so hot ! made me cum twice while reading. love how you build up a character so the humiliation is even more intense. can't wait for chapter 2 ! you're the best Ed!!
Anonymous
11/27/18, 2:07 PM
wow
Anonymous
11/27/18, 1:41 PM
loved your writing for the most part except for the few typos. the references to Greek mythology was a nice touch.