Recent Comments

Ryan
11/27/18, 3:58 PM
Thanks so much. I am going to try and use Microsoft Word as its able to catch the typos more than Google Docs attempts. I am glad that some are intrigued by the idea so far however and will strive to keep up the good work.
Martin
11/27/18, 3:50 PM
I've just removed those totally unnecessary rant postings about Mississippi. I don't want to read this kind of trash here. Please behave and understand that there's a human being on the other side. Thank you for understanding!
Anonymous
11/27/18, 3:23 PM
so hot ! made me cum twice while reading. love how you build up a character so the humiliation is even more intense. can't wait for chapter 2 ! you're the best Ed!!
Anonymous
11/27/18, 2:07 PM
wow
Anonymous
11/27/18, 1:41 PM
loved your writing for the most part except for the few typos. the references to Greek mythology was a nice touch.
LLOYD311
11/27/18, 12:47 PM
Well done, everyone!
Anonymous
11/27/18, 8:16 AM
A nice read. I cannot wait to read the next installments!
11/27/18, 8:16 AM
Good stuff! Looking forward to reading the next part(s).
Symonel
11/27/18, 6:42 AM
Here's the link if interested, just please don't carry this stupid argument over MS there. https://www.cyoc.net/index.php?name=PNphpBB2&file=viewtopic&t=5549
Symonel
11/27/18, 6:34 AM
Alright, this is really starting to suck all the fun out of writing. I like the critiques and feedback that are relevant to my story. But this whole spin-off argument that has nothing to do with what I wrote is really a bummer. I'm going to take a break from spiral for now, I think I shall move my series over to cyoc.net. I'm not offended, but I feel as if I continue here right now, this argument that doesn't pertain to my story will just go on and on. I shall take into account all the advice that has been given to me and I shall try and make my chapters longer. I thank all those who offered constructive criticism. If you want to read more of my series, check me out on cyoc.net ;)