Recent Comments

Anonymous
11/27/18, 2:07 PM
wow
Anonymous
11/27/18, 1:41 PM
loved your writing for the most part except for the few typos. the references to Greek mythology was a nice touch.
LLOYD311
11/27/18, 12:47 PM
Well done, everyone!
Anonymous
11/27/18, 8:16 AM
A nice read. I cannot wait to read the next installments!
11/27/18, 8:16 AM
Good stuff! Looking forward to reading the next part(s).
Symonel
11/27/18, 6:42 AM
Here's the link if interested, just please don't carry this stupid argument over MS there. https://www.cyoc.net/index.php?name=PNphpBB2&file=viewtopic&t=5549
Symonel
11/27/18, 6:34 AM
Alright, this is really starting to suck all the fun out of writing. I like the critiques and feedback that are relevant to my story. But this whole spin-off argument that has nothing to do with what I wrote is really a bummer. I'm going to take a break from spiral for now, I think I shall move my series over to cyoc.net. I'm not offended, but I feel as if I continue here right now, this argument that doesn't pertain to my story will just go on and on. I shall take into account all the advice that has been given to me and I shall try and make my chapters longer. I thank all those who offered constructive criticism. If you want to read more of my series, check me out on cyoc.net ;)
paisaguerro
11/27/18, 5:12 AM
Thanks guys, Ill get back on the story soon...Ive been toying with some ideas.
Jacinto
11/27/18, 5:09 AM
Oh damn I just found this and love it. Bet theyll make dat culo nice and tight to
Anonymous
11/27/18, 4:56 AM
I do love how the dad was VERY creative with what he might be doing without Desmond saying anything. Slave caliber, that. Three muscular hairy men in heat all day long. XD And I wish to see more families in this new town joining in!