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11/26/18, 6:49 PM
@MagnusTheGreat, that has given me an idea :-)
11/26/18, 6:33 PM
It's good but I would like more development and... examples, I mean, how the other cowboys arrived there?
Anonymous
11/26/18, 6:31 PM
saw edlam's name, didn't read the story, automatically added up to bookmark. which needs to be read
Martin
11/26/18, 6:20 PM
I think everything has been said about this. It happens that people get something the wrong way and get very agitated about it. I know, because it happened to me many many times. The important thing is that we all understand that each person is entitled to make a mistake and even entitled to lose it in the moment of rage. We're all just human beings. That's why I really appreciate that everyone is so understanding now, and I'm sure that Hypnothrill was also just writing in a moment of indignation after reading that initial comment. Let's leave it at that! ✌
11/26/18, 5:30 PM
As always... when I see one of your stories I know it will be awesome. I can't wait for part 2 (Or part 11 of reeducator) You're amazing!!!
Corinthian
11/26/18, 5:19 PM
Such a great chapter - better than so many on here, in fact gripping. Wikipedia tells us that 1723 was the year Louis XV attained his majority as King of France. Also, Bach's cantata Darzu ist ershienen der Sohn Gottes was first performed in Leipzig. So we can hear how the year sounded.
Anonymous
11/26/18, 5:05 PM
Then to you, Symonel, I sincerely apologize. I looked into a matter that was not apparent given how terrible many have sought to portray this State. To Hypnothril, I could not care less whether you think it is a high horse or not. To have read something that seemingly implied something highly infactual among a community I have been raised around deeply bothered me. You research any school to find out their names, but ultimately at the end of the day, you will never know what it is like to have to constantly prove to others numerous times just how wrong they are in their assumptions that Mississippi is a terrible place to dwell because of what they perceive is a person speaking for everyone. No bird or window's view will ever tell you the full view. I suggest you take your own advice and get off yours while focusing on your own work and strive to shut down all hate and all infactualities to the side.
Anonymous
11/26/18, 4:34 PM
and yet you did exactly that. The twist ending is not any different by the multitudes of stories on this site about supervillians hypnotising heroes to commit crime. Sure, the ending was somewhat surprising, but nothing new.
Anonymous
11/26/18, 4:30 PM
Can i buy some of that juice?
11/26/18, 4:06 PM
Wow, you did it again. Amazing part one . I look forward to more of Jeff :)