Recent Comments

10/18/24, 2:49 PM
Fun new chapter, you really are on a roll with this again so soon after the next one. I do like the character development of William being gradually reshaped into Adrian's perfect butler and the descriptions of the self touching. it was also nice to see the apartment complex owner coming back in the story and still needing some work. I wonder if you will try out a door to door salesman among his next victims?
Anonymous
10/18/24, 6:30 AM
Sounds like rule 4 establishes team policing; if your teammate resists the program, you must bring him in line. There's no turning back now.

10/18/24, 2:38 PM
@Anonymous The rules do make it hard to resist what is happening.
Damion
10/18/24, 12:40 PM
This is a hot story. Love to see how the brothers of Satan grow.
Zander
10/18/24, 12:20 PM
Thank you for this wonderful story, I agree with all the comments written above and I don't think anything else needs to be added. We're just waiting for chapter 2) I hope it comes out soon. I also hope you'll continue your other stories that are frozen) especially about Creegan and Jakeris.
10/17/24, 10:13 AM
Loved it well done. Great writing too. Thank you

10/18/24, 11:36 AM
@[Blackscar](/user/show/10036989) Thank you! I love knowing I’ve contributed to people’s enjoyment.
10/17/24, 12:30 AM
Excellent writing.

10/18/24, 11:35 AM
@[blankbot](/user/show/1247965) I appreciate that! I sometimes read stories that have immense potential but bad writing distracts from the content.
10/18/24, 9:28 AM
Hot chapter. It ended on a exciting cliffhanger though. Can't wait too see what would happen to John.
Anonymous
10/18/24, 9:10 AM
How often are the updates going to be?
10/18/24, 7:39 AM
This is incredibly hot it has me ready to bust already. I can’t wait to read what happens next
Anonymous
10/18/24, 7:31 AM
"Fucking Tiffany" 😂😂 This chapter took me three tries to get through if you know what I mean 🥵🥵🥵 This whole series has been outstanding.