Recent Comments

Anonymous
11/26/18, 4:34 PM
and yet you did exactly that. The twist ending is not any different by the multitudes of stories on this site about supervillians hypnotising heroes to commit crime. Sure, the ending was somewhat surprising, but nothing new.
Anonymous
11/26/18, 4:30 PM
Can i buy some of that juice?
11/26/18, 4:06 PM
Wow, you did it again. Amazing part one . I look forward to more of Jeff :)
LongtimeFan
11/26/18, 3:49 PM
Brilliant chapter! The attention to historical and magical detail is top-notch. Thanks for a phenomenal story!
Anonymous
11/26/18, 2:38 PM
Always an exciting day to see another Edlam story posted! Great first chapter, looking forward to the second one!
Anonymous
11/26/18, 2:18 PM
Super super hot, love all the detail Was a little sad that the butt stuff didn't go too far, maybe get into scat and diarrhea next?
Anonymous
11/26/18, 1:29 PM
I was finding this story incredibly hot until that weird twist of an ending. I came here to wank, not to contemplate the moral complexities of hypnosis.
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
11/26/18, 1:19 PM
I agree with another post about snatching a complete football uniform, jock, compressions, pads, cleats, helmet even mouth guard!
Anonymous
11/26/18, 1:13 PM
just thought a TUMBLR post about a guy stealing football uniforms who became a football player under Coach's control. Yours is amazing and love to see it continues!!
Anonymous
11/26/18, 1:04 PM
Hot concept but I wish there was more on the transformation and the process. Felt a little rushed at the end. Otherwise, well written