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11/26/18, 5:30 PM
As always... when I see one of your stories I know it will be awesome. I can't wait for part 2 (Or part 11 of reeducator) You're amazing!!!
Corinthian
11/26/18, 5:19 PM
Such a great chapter - better than so many on here, in fact gripping. Wikipedia tells us that 1723 was the year Louis XV attained his majority as King of France. Also, Bach's cantata Darzu ist ershienen der Sohn Gottes was first performed in Leipzig. So we can hear how the year sounded.
Anonymous
11/26/18, 5:05 PM
Then to you, Symonel, I sincerely apologize. I looked into a matter that was not apparent given how terrible many have sought to portray this State. To Hypnothril, I could not care less whether you think it is a high horse or not. To have read something that seemingly implied something highly infactual among a community I have been raised around deeply bothered me. You research any school to find out their names, but ultimately at the end of the day, you will never know what it is like to have to constantly prove to others numerous times just how wrong they are in their assumptions that Mississippi is a terrible place to dwell because of what they perceive is a person speaking for everyone. No bird or window's view will ever tell you the full view. I suggest you take your own advice and get off yours while focusing on your own work and strive to shut down all hate and all infactualities to the side.
Anonymous
11/26/18, 4:34 PM
and yet you did exactly that. The twist ending is not any different by the multitudes of stories on this site about supervillians hypnotising heroes to commit crime. Sure, the ending was somewhat surprising, but nothing new.
Anonymous
11/26/18, 4:30 PM
Can i buy some of that juice?
11/26/18, 4:06 PM
Wow, you did it again. Amazing part one . I look forward to more of Jeff :)
LongtimeFan
11/26/18, 3:49 PM
Brilliant chapter! The attention to historical and magical detail is top-notch. Thanks for a phenomenal story!
Anonymous
11/26/18, 2:38 PM
Always an exciting day to see another Edlam story posted! Great first chapter, looking forward to the second one!
Anonymous
11/26/18, 2:18 PM
Super super hot, love all the detail Was a little sad that the butt stuff didn't go too far, maybe get into scat and diarrhea next?
Anonymous
11/26/18, 1:29 PM
I was finding this story incredibly hot until that weird twist of an ending. I came here to wank, not to contemplate the moral complexities of hypnosis.