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hypnojockpup1234@gmail.com
11/26/18, 12:42 PM
another awesome story
Anonymous
11/26/18, 10:08 AM
so so hot ! Would like to see the story when he got his Lamborghini.
Chrono
11/26/18, 6:36 AM
At least he retained some of his former self. That makes this story a little bit better than the others disregarding the typos.
Anonymous
11/26/18, 6:18 AM
I don't think the ending is out of nowhere. Hypnosis isn't all about sexual play between master and slave. It can be used for crime and put the blame on others. Don't over-romanticize it.
Anonymous
11/26/18, 5:50 AM
I love this story so much. cant wait to see what happens to the coach!
Anonymous
11/26/18, 5:43 AM
Very hot! great job please continue
Symonel
11/26/18, 5:27 AM
To the unnamed anon that took offense at my story. Hynothrill is correct, I was not speaking of the University of Mississippi or Mississippi State or anything to do with their campuses or their histories. I purposefully did not name the Christian College that Jackson is attending nor the Liberal Arts College he likes to visit partly due to this very reason. But no, I was not referring to University of Mississippi or Mississippi State as the colleges that Jackson is involved with. On a separate note, I appreciate the critiques and the advice. I shall try and make future chapters longer. It will probably just take longer for me to publish them as I try to work out in my head where to take things. Again suggestions are welcome. Thank you to Hypnothrill, Ryan Fuertes, firesix, LongTimeFan, Yvne, etc. for their input.
Anonymous
11/26/18, 5:11 AM
Great story! Loved it!
Ryan Fuentes
11/26/18, 4:53 AM
Bashing another over reading comprehension is a tad terrible. I think it is nifty that it was something a person overlooked and could naturally assume the writer meant one thing, but find out it was another. It happens all the time with writing, especially if its someone from the area who might have read a little more into the matter before they realized and offered some insight. If people are losing interest, then they just are. Nothing comes from riling one another up. To the author, its clear you have fans. I would say to keep up the good work and be a bit more alert on the method of how you write. Written words can be ambiguous, but it also gives an effect I like: Where the author or artist has designed their own work to be intended one way and the audience sees it entirely different.
Anonymous
11/26/18, 4:37 AM
Regardless of how you feel, what I SAID was not for someone to take offense to. I am genuinely hoping that they take the time to look into these matters more as opposed to falsely throwing accusations around, like you saying I am on a high horse for simply misreading. Of that, I can apologize for, but it does not negate that this premise is becoming less thought out all the more. I said what I said.