Recent Comments

Anonymous
11/26/18, 2:38 PM
Always an exciting day to see another Edlam story posted! Great first chapter, looking forward to the second one!
Anonymous
11/26/18, 2:18 PM
Super super hot, love all the detail Was a little sad that the butt stuff didn't go too far, maybe get into scat and diarrhea next?
Anonymous
11/26/18, 1:29 PM
I was finding this story incredibly hot until that weird twist of an ending. I came here to wank, not to contemplate the moral complexities of hypnosis.
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
11/26/18, 1:19 PM
I agree with another post about snatching a complete football uniform, jock, compressions, pads, cleats, helmet even mouth guard!
Anonymous
11/26/18, 1:13 PM
just thought a TUMBLR post about a guy stealing football uniforms who became a football player under Coach's control. Yours is amazing and love to see it continues!!
Anonymous
11/26/18, 1:04 PM
Hot concept but I wish there was more on the transformation and the process. Felt a little rushed at the end. Otherwise, well written
hypnojockpup1234@gmail.com
11/26/18, 12:42 PM
another awesome story
Anonymous
11/26/18, 10:08 AM
so so hot ! Would like to see the story when he got his Lamborghini.
Chrono
11/26/18, 6:36 AM
At least he retained some of his former self. That makes this story a little bit better than the others disregarding the typos.
Anonymous
11/26/18, 6:18 AM
I don't think the ending is out of nowhere. Hypnosis isn't all about sexual play between master and slave. It can be used for crime and put the blame on others. Don't over-romanticize it.