Recent Comments

Anonymous
11/26/18, 2:13 AM
I feel like that ending came completely out of nowhere. Other than that, great story. Made me cum twice.
Anonymous
11/26/18, 2:11 AM
the theme of 2020
Anonymous
11/26/18, 2:11 AM
love it!!!!
Anonymous
11/25/18, 11:16 PM
Loved it. WOuld love to see an expansion on this story and a sequel
11/25/18, 11:05 PM
i guess I'm going to b weary of my emails for a while... well done, wish it was longer
Touche
11/25/18, 11:00 PM
The story and drama are superbly erotically exciting to experience in words the changes that transform Marc into a small hairless peepeed boy with small nuts that do not produce any sperm into a deep and passionate lover for his Master/daddy. I am looking forward to reading about more changes that were hinted at in the story about piercings. Excellent and many thanks for taking the time to create such a great read that stirred by horniness.
Anonymous
11/25/18, 10:33 PM
great work.
11/25/18, 9:12 PM
Wonderful and enticing story. So, where is that parade? I will bring a spare hanky.
Anonymous
11/25/18, 8:35 PM
These chapters are way too short, if I'm being completely honest. I can tell that you are excited to get this story out there. But at the very least, add more to your chapters. The last three chapters could have been easily combined into one chapter. In three chapters, your main character has only eaten supposedly magical beans and jacked off. I hope you can improve going forward. Otherwise, I'll lose interest.
BankStreet
11/25/18, 8:14 PM
Can we hope/assume that Todd is due for a change in perspective?