Recent Comments

10/18/24, 9:53 PM
I just want to say that I love this story and I’m so desperate for a sequel. I want to see what him getting pregnant is like. Does it take 9 months like in real life or does the transformation happen faster? How does it he deal with it? Fuck it’s so hot
10/18/24, 6:48 PM
So the attempt at defiance resulted in getting crushed hard. It would be delightfully twisted if the alternate ending where Mike tries to unequivocally submit ends up in him winning instead, although admittedly that would require something really odd to happen.

StalkerInTheShadow
10/18/24, 9:38 PM
@[anarchomegalomaniac](/user/show/907794) Mike had been crushed hard, as you have said. Though, I don't think he truly lost and Ryan truly won either. The ending showed that Mike had been right about Ryan knowing no love, and thus Ryan may have lots of fuck-toys but none of love, only attention deliberately demanded but no affection willingly given, and ended up still get envious and bitter at those who have it (such as Chip and Trevor).
10/18/24, 8:06 PM
I hope you’ll consider continuing this exceptionally hot story! I am eager to see where the characters go from here! Thank you for writing it!
10/18/24, 3:10 AM
It’s another amazing Chapter 😳😳🥵🥵 like REALLY amazing . Please don’t worry about taking time . Hehe I imagine the new substance is like the one used in your first ever story where it could be made of a cocktail of the soaked sweat rigged out of the feinds socks hehe or something similar 😳😳😳😵‍💫 maybe they have a stock of bottles and one of the characters asks what’s in it hehe

10/18/24, 7:49 PM
@[Glennyboi](/user/show/917433) Glad you like it :blush: The new substance can honestly be anything. It pretty much has the effects of chloroform as it is portrayed in movies and tv shows, rather than what it actually does in real life. That's what the main issue was.
Takanashi
10/18/24, 5:25 PM
I can't believe I was the first to read this, I kept updating every so often hoping to find a new chapter, everything was perfect from start to finish, it was a very good closing chapter, very exciting. I came away thinking a lot about Mike and how he became a senseless slave. I hope to read more of your stories or who knows, if you dare to release alternate chapters. I was left thinking about what it would be like if Ryan ended up falling into his own game or if in the end he and Mike accidentally ended up being slaves of a third.
10/18/24, 2:49 PM
Fun new chapter, you really are on a roll with this again so soon after the next one. I do like the character development of William being gradually reshaped into Adrian's perfect butler and the descriptions of the self touching. it was also nice to see the apartment complex owner coming back in the story and still needing some work. I wonder if you will try out a door to door salesman among his next victims?
Anonymous
10/18/24, 6:30 AM
Sounds like rule 4 establishes team policing; if your teammate resists the program, you must bring him in line. There's no turning back now.

10/18/24, 2:38 PM
@Anonymous The rules do make it hard to resist what is happening.
Damion
10/18/24, 12:40 PM
This is a hot story. Love to see how the brothers of Satan grow.
Zander
10/18/24, 12:20 PM
Thank you for this wonderful story, I agree with all the comments written above and I don't think anything else needs to be added. We're just waiting for chapter 2) I hope it comes out soon. I also hope you'll continue your other stories that are frozen) especially about Creegan and Jakeris.
10/17/24, 10:13 AM
Loved it well done. Great writing too. Thank you

10/18/24, 11:36 AM
@[Blackscar](/user/show/10036989) Thank you! I love knowing I’ve contributed to people’s enjoyment.