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Anonymous
11/24/18, 11:57 AM
Greaaaat suggestion: make a next target of some cocky handsome executive and make more humiliation, I love suited men being humiliated. pleeeeeeeeeeasse
11/24/18, 11:50 AM
Thanks for reading again. - I think I might just do that in the next chapter but it will be temporary. I'm thinking when they change to play a game. He can't stop looking at feet and such. - It's definatly about the transformation of an alpha jock into a little bitch beta slave. I am not to keen on humiliation in public places but maybe I'll do something like that in the locker room but reprogram all of his teammates including his coach to forget what the see after Alex i done with him. Just for the sake of it not spreading too much. Alex wants to make Marcus pay not make him so depressed that he is no fun anymore. The next chapter we will see something about the tapes and how they affect Marcus. Like I mentioned in a comment before the mind control/ what he is willing to do is based on a percentage meter. He started off at 30% and now is about on 45%. I will make clothing changes but probably not just yet. The hair dyening and 'slutty' clothes are also a good idea. - Im thinking of Alex taking Marcus to a kinky gay-bar (in not sure how it's called) and make them do their doggylplay there/
Anonymous
11/24/18, 10:50 AM
this is really hot. I really like how the coach is a bit rough with his words while being slutty and submissive.Just adds to the hotness of mind controlling. Would like to see him in action soon. also I'm hoping you'd be adding more rough men or something better. Thank you so much for this. xoxo
Anonymous
11/24/18, 10:13 AM
do more humiliation, and also outdoor dogplay pls there is no story of such
Tass
11/24/18, 9:47 AM
can't wait for the changes. Perhaps an racial change, some tattoos and piercings as well
11/24/18, 9:45 AM
Hope to find more of the story. Best part was Cole. I could absolutely imagine everything that was going on with him.
Anonymous
11/24/18, 9:38 AM
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Anonymous
11/24/18, 9:18 AM
Definitely love where this is going. The story seems to be about control and the transformation of an alpha jock into a beta slave. All of the different kinks and fetishes you listed would be hot, but they should be simply the results and techniques that Alex uses to bitch Marcus. Like I would not make any one fetish to central to the story, other than Master/slave and mind control and so on that is necessary for the transformation and end results. I would love to see more domination and humiliation in school and at home by Alex, maybe go more into detail about the hypnosis tapes and how they are affecting Marcus while he sleeps. Also love the outward changes like making Marcus wear his jock. Maybe show how he slowly learns to love showing off his body and wearing slutty sub clothes and underwear. Maybe show that he dyes his hair and waxes all his body hair off to "better" show off his body in his new clothes. Also, if possible, could the next chapter be longer? You post pretty quickly, but I can't wait to see what happens. In any case, love where it is going. Can't wait for more!
Lispy Lips
11/24/18, 9:10 AM
I love your mind and creativity WonderBread. I'd love for you to take me, fuck me, and make me yours.
Anonymous
11/24/18, 7:12 AM
Could you put a code for every color? I got confused which one was which at the end.