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Jan 4, 2007
Stroppy
11/24/18, 3:51 AM
Fantastic
Anonymous
11/24/18, 3:07 AM
i shot a load reading your stories again. so hot!
Nov 22, 2018
Curiosity
11/24/18, 2:43 AM
Hypnothrill and Horologia, that's a fair critique. I didn't put much time or thought into developing Randy's motivation beyond me wanting it to be a transformation story. I'll definitely admit I rushed it for the sake of getting it up sooner. Anon, no I don't have a Patreon and sadly no plans to make one, but that could change. :)
Nov 23, 2018
Anonymous
11/23/18, 11:46 PM
How about the employees wear diapers to stop unnecessary bathroom breaks and increase workers productivity.
Anonymous
11/23/18, 10:20 PM
Looking forward to Marc's descent into bottom bitch
Anonymous
11/23/18, 9:45 PM
Great installment, really building it up nicely.
xmeesteresx@gmail.com
11/23/18, 9:39 PM
Anonymous. Thanks for reading. That's an interesting idea for sure but maybe a bit too far. Alex just wants to make Marcus pay. I might incorporate that and go over his limit a little and make him watch it. But I don't think I would send it to his friends. We want to make him pay not fuck up the rest of his life. They are in college after all. I can't believe I am saying this but I want it to be kinda believable, low-key. Alex also doesnt feel like the person to bully someone like that to the extreme as he knows how it feels.
Meesteres
11/23/18, 9:05 PM
@Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com Thank you for reading my story. I will probably mix your and anonymous' comments and program his teammates to do some things to Marcus.
Meesteres
11/23/18, 9:03 PM
@HeruKane thanks. Ya know if I had given more background to the charachters, I would have made Marcus low-key a decent guy is some ways. But that is urge to bully gave him this outcome. Maybe I will write a chapter and split it into 2 parts (Alex' POV & Marcus' POV) on how their relationship was before the assingment. The reason I first didn't do it is becouse I wanted to jump straight to the 'action'. And I will definaltly take your suggestion into consideration.
Ryder
11/23/18, 9:03 PM
This. This needs infinite expansions! Glorious, Epic, well written, EVERYTHING! Love it!