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10/17/24, 6:07 PM
So fucking intense, can’t wait for the next installment🔥🔥

10/17/24, 10:22 PM
@[U.K. guy](/user/show/1944978) Thanks I spent a lot of time on this one. Taking swizz’s handbook idea and making something I hope is fun and interesting
fan
10/16/24, 6:24 PM
reread this again; sometimes I wonder what if jake and dave's bodies are linked up in the end. it turns out that they were united after all as alpha and beta in service of the administrator though i am unsure if the administrator would choose that decision willfully; would it consciously let them?

10/17/24, 9:19 PM
@fan I remember when writing "Brain Feed", I always had a feeling that Dave had some power of suggestion in being paired up with Jacob. That he gave a recommendation, and that suggestion was for Jacob to become a beta drone, and the two of them be paired together. I mean if the drones become the eyes and ears and sensors, then the Administrator does need to be a little receptive to what the drones are perceiving. So I remember thinking that Dave would have suggested that he be paired with Jacob. Then of course, the facility would do an in-depth analysis whether this would benefit their goals. Would Dave and Jacob's DNA create powerful hybrid clones? Would Jacob be a suitable beta drone, or is he better suited as an Alpha? After the analysis was conducted, the facility determined that Dave was correct in his observation and carried out the drone's suggestion. Whether there was an emotional or logical purpose behind Dave's suggestion ... that's for the reader to determine. I remember, when I wrote the original Brain Feed, that I always liked the idea that Dave could assert some control ... or have some minor influence over the Administrator. Or maybe, in a way, a man could make a suggestion: "Jacob would be more receptive to our goals if you pair us up; me as the Alpha, him as the beta." Even though I had this idea when writing, I just couldn't incorporate it into the story. Everything is told from Jacob's perspective. And there was no way for me to show the reader what Dave was thinking internally.
10/17/24, 8:52 PM
Simply fantastic! From the first to the last sentence. Hot as fuck and wholesome at the same time. And probably one of the best written bottom slut boy I've ever seen. So relatable...
10/5/24, 7:00 PM
Another exciting--and incredibly hot--installment! :fire: So what are the Fiends up to that they need to recruit promising young (and cute) chemists? Elijah's recruitment of Nick was awesome! Ingratiating himself into Nick's life after a "random" encounter on campus, then sedating him with his sneaker smell, finally putting him to sleep with chloroform, and carrying him over his shoulder. Wow! That really hit all my buttons! I have to agree with Glennyboi. I was never really that into sneakers before this story. But now I think it's pretty hot. As always, can't wait for the next chapter to see where this most excellent story is heading.

10/8/24, 3:52 AM
@[Profguy15](/user/show/920341) Glad you liked it :blush: I have to admit, I've been wondering how exactly to introduce Elijah since chapter 6... Originally, he was supposed to be straight up evil, but writing this chapter, I realized I want to try making him more human, perhaps even redeemable. Combining my love for sneakers with my chloroform kidnapping fantasies always feels a bit strange, like trying to go in two separate directions at the same time.. As for the next chapter, I just finished it and it should be up in a few days :blush:

10/17/24, 7:32 PM
@[SleepyAsh](/user/show/10046846) Any idea when the next chapter will get posted? As always, really looking forward to it!

10/17/24, 8:36 PM
@[Profguy15](/user/show/920341) I'm very sorry for the long wait.. the next chapter has been delayed due to the site updating its rules. Chloroform is no longer on the table and I've had to change all my stories accordingly. I'm hoping the next chapter will be eligible to publish soon. :frowning:
10/17/24, 1:29 PM
Is part two going well?

10/17/24, 3:35 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) Haha not really! I've been busy with a huge project (commission) which is nearly complete!

10/17/24, 3:51 PM
@[Ciriii](/user/show/10002839) Nice, looking forward to both and the orc story
10/15/24, 9:45 PM
A question for people reading this, should I remove the gay-to-straight aspect and/or the takeover/possession stuff? I am not averse to making changes if my initial take on this chapter wasn't a good idea

10/16/24, 12:18 AM
@[GoodBoy](/user/show/1900997) I think you leave it as is. You aren't going to make everyone happy so make yourself happy.

10/17/24, 2:09 PM
@[GoodBoy](/user/show/1900997) I agree with Drake. G2S isn't my shtick, but this is _your_ story and you can write it however _you_ like. Besides, it's only one chapter so if someone doesn't like it they can just read and enjoy the rest.
Pcm
10/17/24, 1:50 PM
Guys, I am really happy and appreciate such insightful discussion you are giving to my series, even happier still to have people wanting to write more stories set in my universe. Unfortunately, I have been informed that this extremely long comment section greatly impacts the stability of the site. Unfortunately, I will ask no more comment be written here and instead be posted to the forum instead, and I will the link down below. I really hope to continue the discussion with you all over there for the next chapter and in future series if you are interested. I understand that setting an account will be an inconvenience, but I'm afraid that I will have to turn off the comment section for the next chapter to avoid the repeat of the problem and I dont want to impose any more torubles for the admins. Once again, I'm _very_ happy to get to have so much discussion in my stories, and it is a dream come true! I really really hope to be able to continue the discussion on the forum in the future. https://forum.gaykinkystories.com/t/discussion-for-the-plot-characters-and-setting-of-knightly-duties-and-hunt-kill-breed/6993/27
10/17/24, 10:56 AM
That « Pussy Eating » is epic! We all became Monty for a moment.it’s such a charge of sensuality, and brilliantly deployed. Capote used to said that the talent of a writer lies in his power of description. You certainly possess this talent!
10/16/24, 9:52 PM
Cannot wait for the sequel! Your tf stories have been some of my favorite!

10/17/24, 10:53 AM
@[DrillT00th](/user/show/10012111) Thank you so much I really appreciate the compliment and I'm glad you enjoy my stuff. I reckon the next chapter will be out in maybe 3 weeks depending on how busy I get lol
Ben
10/17/24, 8:05 AM
Still one of my faves! Keeping an eye out for more of your writing! 🔥 🔥