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Nov 20, 2018
UchihaDEMS
11/21/18, 1:40 AM
I like it. The way you build it step by step was cool. The only thing I don't get it is why is coach friendly with Marcus and not going for Grant?
Anonymous
11/21/18, 12:03 AM
with Blu drinking a age regression mariposa, does that mean he'll be young forever?
Nov 20, 2018
11/20/18, 10:51 PM
That was really amazing! It was hot as fuck, but somehow kind of sweet too. The build-up was done really well; for the slow-burn hypno stories, most people either take way too long to get sexy, or they get to fucking immediately. Your story was just the right length, and it was hot right from the start, not just when they started fucking. I love that Marcus is the sub/bottom despite being the big muscular football player! It's such a big turn-on for me! Like Heru Kane, I really liked that you didn't make Marcus an empty-headed sextoy by the end. It was nice and subversive that he actually got smarter despite becoming Grant's boyfriend/cumdump by the end. (I also liked the twist that Grant is going to get a harem of muscular football players in a few months! Great ending) Everything about this was so hot and well written! Your stories are fantastic, keep up the great work
11/20/18, 10:36 PM
Loved it, as usual. I'm really rooting for Iowa and O to figure themselves out.
11/20/18, 9:59 PM
Hey. This story was awesome. You need to make this into a series! Haven't read anything like this.
Nov 20, 2018
Mutabear
11/20/18, 8:37 PM
I love it when a story has a sexy happy ending.
LongtimeFan
11/20/18, 7:57 PM
Another great installment! I love the subtle touch of using the word "Blu" whenever the former Charles speaks; it's a reminder that the transformation is now permanent. I hope things work out for Todd, too! Thank you for writing such an exciting story. :)
Nov 20, 2018
Anonymous
11/20/18, 7:46 PM
Very well written and slow build up to the changes that take place. I agree with the responders above that the story demands a follow up sequel.
Cigarpup18
11/20/18, 7:17 PM
I want a maduro smoking forever buddy to mount me while we smoke our maduros
Nov 20, 2018
11/20/18, 6:56 PM
Interesting sexy story. I like the time low, very sexy. I also like the expansion to the whole team. Very nice. I really like to there is no dumbing down. Nor any visible changes that wouk d harm their lives. Also I like how nicely the QB takes it. Maybe he can be treated with some respect as the changes occur. The bit of rimming mention was nice though I wish it was expanded a bit.