Recent Comments

11/20/18, 10:36 PM
Loved it, as usual. I'm really rooting for Iowa and O to figure themselves out.
11/20/18, 9:59 PM
Hey. This story was awesome. You need to make this into a series! Haven't read anything like this.
Nov 20, 2018
Mutabear
11/20/18, 8:37 PM
I love it when a story has a sexy happy ending.
LongtimeFan
11/20/18, 7:57 PM
Another great installment! I love the subtle touch of using the word "Blu" whenever the former Charles speaks; it's a reminder that the transformation is now permanent. I hope things work out for Todd, too! Thank you for writing such an exciting story. :)
Nov 20, 2018
Anonymous
11/20/18, 7:46 PM
Very well written and slow build up to the changes that take place. I agree with the responders above that the story demands a follow up sequel.
Cigarpup18
11/20/18, 7:17 PM
I want a maduro smoking forever buddy to mount me while we smoke our maduros
Nov 20, 2018
11/20/18, 6:56 PM
Interesting sexy story. I like the time low, very sexy. I also like the expansion to the whole team. Very nice. I really like to there is no dumbing down. Nor any visible changes that wouk d harm their lives. Also I like how nicely the QB takes it. Maybe he can be treated with some respect as the changes occur. The bit of rimming mention was nice though I wish it was expanded a bit.
Nov 20, 2018
Anonymous
11/20/18, 4:21 PM
Would definitely be interested to see the after effects of that mandatory audio files *wink wink*
Nov 20, 2018
sweetcol
11/20/18, 3:59 PM
the plot is so smooth, i like it very much
Nov 20, 2018
sweetcol
11/20/18, 3:59 PM
the plot is so smooth, i like it very much