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10/18/24, 2:48 AM
This story is sooo fucking good and warmed my heart while I was overseas! The little hints and nods to references are so gently done I was cackling! Love this!
10/17/24, 11:22 PM
Wow! That's a surprising and disappointing change to the rules. I'm especially bummed because chloroform is one of my major kinks. Maybe you could also publish your stories elsewhere where that is not an issue? The Erotic Mind-Control Story Archive (mcstories.com) comes to mind. Of course that would be much more work for you to write your stories in two different ways. But as one of your adoring fans . . . maybe that's a possibility? :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye: In any event, I will read your stories with or without chloroform in them. Looking forward to the next installment of this wonderful story. Thanks once again for sharing your writing talents with the group!

10/18/24, 2:17 AM
@[Profguy15](/user/show/920341) I am very sorry about the change :frowning: while chloroform is no longer going to be used by the characters, what they'll be using is a drug called "glorochlorm", which has similar effects but is completely fantastical. I am also quite bummed, but I understand the owner's desire for the site to not be associated with any real substances. There isn't really any need for there to be two different ways to write the stories, as, going forward, the only real change is going to be that all instances where chloroform would have been used, glorochlorm is going to take its place. All previous chapters have been changed in that manner as well. Once again, I'm very sorry for the inconvenience, and I hope the change is not going to be too immersion-breaking.
10/18/24, 1:31 AM
Intriguing developments; beyond a simple mind control story. It is sophisticated yet honest like the main character.
10/18/24, 1:18 AM
So sad that Author can't keep a story going this looked like it was going to be good but than they stopped writing.
10/17/24, 11:28 PM
I know this one was a mixed bag in terms of response, but I’m really enjoying this series and hope you continue it! Always a fan of good costume TFs around this time of year, and these have definitely been hitting the spot!
10/17/24, 11:13 PM
oooooo damn GOOD!!
Anonymous
10/17/24, 11:06 PM
Wow, luv it!
10/17/24, 6:07 PM
So fucking intense, can’t wait for the next installment🔥🔥

10/17/24, 10:22 PM
@[U.K. guy](/user/show/1944978) Thanks I spent a lot of time on this one. Taking swizz’s handbook idea and making something I hope is fun and interesting
fan
10/16/24, 6:24 PM
reread this again; sometimes I wonder what if jake and dave's bodies are linked up in the end. it turns out that they were united after all as alpha and beta in service of the administrator though i am unsure if the administrator would choose that decision willfully; would it consciously let them?

10/17/24, 9:19 PM
@fan I remember when writing "Brain Feed", I always had a feeling that Dave had some power of suggestion in being paired up with Jacob. That he gave a recommendation, and that suggestion was for Jacob to become a beta drone, and the two of them be paired together. I mean if the drones become the eyes and ears and sensors, then the Administrator does need to be a little receptive to what the drones are perceiving. So I remember thinking that Dave would have suggested that he be paired with Jacob. Then of course, the facility would do an in-depth analysis whether this would benefit their goals. Would Dave and Jacob's DNA create powerful hybrid clones? Would Jacob be a suitable beta drone, or is he better suited as an Alpha? After the analysis was conducted, the facility determined that Dave was correct in his observation and carried out the drone's suggestion. Whether there was an emotional or logical purpose behind Dave's suggestion ... that's for the reader to determine. I remember, when I wrote the original Brain Feed, that I always liked the idea that Dave could assert some control ... or have some minor influence over the Administrator. Or maybe, in a way, a man could make a suggestion: "Jacob would be more receptive to our goals if you pair us up; me as the Alpha, him as the beta." Even though I had this idea when writing, I just couldn't incorporate it into the story. Everything is told from Jacob's perspective. And there was no way for me to show the reader what Dave was thinking internally.
10/17/24, 8:52 PM
Simply fantastic! From the first to the last sentence. Hot as fuck and wholesome at the same time. And probably one of the best written bottom slut boy I've ever seen. So relatable...