Recent Comments

Anonymous
11/19/18, 3:20 PM
Super different and hot! Can't wait to read more.
Anonymous
11/19/18, 3:19 PM
Pretty good story. Wish there'd been more description in the brainwashing process rather than just setting it up then skipping it.
Anonymous
11/19/18, 2:42 PM
Enjoy the start. Feel like this may be a story you posted elsewhere because it feels very familiar.
Anonymous
11/19/18, 2:19 PM
haha sweatbox is hot! this is a great start, love the slow burn
Lambo
11/19/18, 12:30 PM
Great start, really looking forward to the next
Betasskin
11/19/18, 12:14 PM
top marks. hits the spot.
11/19/18, 10:54 AM
Oh man, great start! And the name Gymbox made me think about one of my favorite saunas, Sweatbox, which is where I always work out when I'm in London. I can't wait to see where this goes next!
zefrog3@Yahoo.com
11/19/18, 9:20 AM
guilty pleasure
Anonymous
11/19/18, 8:08 AM
it was ok
Anonymous
11/19/18, 5:25 AM
is a good story I think the clothes disappearing is a tad too emphasized and there doesn't have to be that much attention brought to it. and the confusion thing lasted too long. it left alot of incidents that seemed to just drag on. and the top and bottom in the sex scene kinda takes away from the emerging of the characters is a good story great concept and should you continue it, it can only get better.