Recent Comments

11/17/18, 3:37 PM
Reality change stuff is some of my favourite stuff to read and this is no exception. It's especially great when we get to see the gradual loss of resistance as with Eli.
Anonymous
11/17/18, 3:28 PM
this one has potential to become a great series
Anonymous
11/17/18, 3:06 PM
The whole story was well-handled. A fun, great read.
Anonymous
11/17/18, 2:54 PM
please tell me there is more!!!!!
LongtimeFan
11/17/18, 2:49 PM
HOT DAMN! I'm riding the train to Jersey and am rock hard. ;p This story was incredible! Love the gradual brainwashing, the mantras, the casual sex, the emptying of the minds...but what I like best are the commentary on the ubiquitous nature of screens in our world (why doesn't "Black Mirror" make THIS episode? Bunch of shirtless buff hunks...), and the fact that New Realities is, in its own twisted way, trying to help the world, and making sure everyone enjoys their new mindless life. This is why you're the best, Hypnothrill! :D
Anonymous
11/17/18, 2:00 PM
This was so hot. I love the gradual change into the brainwashing. I definitely would want a second part telling it from the New Reality point of view. Telling us about their world or even what would happen once everyone was gay
Anonymous
11/17/18, 1:02 PM
I would love to see one more chapter of protagonist tf before the revenge starts. really good story so far,please continue!
JR
11/17/18, 11:56 AM
l think Cameron needs to be taken down a notch or two maybe shrink his cock and make him a bottom or fatten him up and make him a bottom.
LongtimeFan
11/17/18, 11:55 AM
Of course! You wrote "How Much is Too Much?" here! I thought it was you, but I had to confirm. You're truly a phenomenal author, and your insights into the male mind are brilliant. Keep on writing! :)
LongtimeFan
11/17/18, 11:53 AM
Great story! I'd like to see Cameron get his just desserts as well. Also, it's sad how accurately you paint this picture...Cameron's such an abusive jerk, and you leave readers wondering whether his whole "nice guy" act in the beginning was just a ploy to turn the protagonist into his personal doll. Creepy and heartbreaking...but excellently written.