Recent Comments

Anonymous
11/14/18, 11:40 AM
You post a hell of a lot of stories and in my opinion that affects the quality of your writing. Why not try to write a few really good stories with real focus on the sexy aspects, rather than loads and loads of stories that have good premises but just don't really go anywhere? Up to you, but I'd really recommend it.
Nov 13, 2018
LongtimeFan
11/14/18, 11:06 AM
Brilliant story! I didn't catch the "exhibit= university athlete name" until the end, but it's a fun detail. Plus the guys are all smoking hot...I have a bit of a sleep kink, so seeing these gorgeous hunks passed out was extra fun. Thanks for a great story!
Anonymous
11/14/18, 6:17 AM
This was super kinky and well-written. It got a bit confusing at times and I think in the middle with the transformations there could have been a bit more description going on, but the spontaneity was hot.
11/14/18, 5:02 AM
I thought that this was quite sexy. I love subliminal hypnosis and obliviousness. So yeah good stuff.
Nov 13, 2018
Anonymous
11/14/18, 4:59 AM
How do you know this isn't the introduction?
11/14/18, 3:45 AM
What a well written and amazing story!! Thank you so much! What a haunting ending...
Nov 13, 2018
11/14/18, 3:40 AM
This is a quick overview of what could have been a great series. I love the concept. I would have loved to read a series about the capture of each one in their previous lives, their resistance, their acquiescence, how they became obedient sex slaves, the transformation from running rebel to obedient slave for Cody, Jake and Brett. I like the animal references, but again, if we knew their story they could have fitting names from their previous lives and transformation as well as their physical attributes. I'd really like to read a story series from you with these factors included. I like the way you think making men into animals. Grrwoof.
Anonymous
11/14/18, 3:32 AM
It had a good amount of obliviousness, but could have used more sex scenes to complement the growing number of oblivious guys.
Nov 13, 2018
Anonymous
11/13/18, 10:35 PM
wow, excellent concept! Please continue this story!
nycboot
11/13/18, 9:38 PM
This is such an incredible story. I also wonder, after all the Mariposa is gone, what is going to be the long-term effect on Derek and Charles. And hey, maybe Todd can have a few drinks? :)