Recent Comments

Anonymous
11/14/18, 4:00 PM
Really hoping to see this story continue, Bleuboy!
Anonymous
11/14/18, 3:51 PM
please keep this up the story is awesome!
ForgottenCradle
11/14/18, 3:30 PM
I was beginning to lose interest in daddy Steve,but the coach reignited this series for me. I love his hard ass whore character. Great work,great content,nicely written Keep up the great work
gxonroj@yahoo.com
11/14/18, 3:11 PM
Thank you for the input. I caught one big mistake I made and made some minor changes to hopefully make it flow better. The learning curve is real.
Tom
11/14/18, 11:53 AM
Wow! One of the best straight to gay stories yet! Need a roommate? :-)
Anonymous
11/14/18, 11:40 AM
You post a hell of a lot of stories and in my opinion that affects the quality of your writing. Why not try to write a few really good stories with real focus on the sexy aspects, rather than loads and loads of stories that have good premises but just don't really go anywhere? Up to you, but I'd really recommend it.
Nov 13, 2018
LongtimeFan
11/14/18, 11:06 AM
Brilliant story! I didn't catch the "exhibit= university athlete name" until the end, but it's a fun detail. Plus the guys are all smoking hot...I have a bit of a sleep kink, so seeing these gorgeous hunks passed out was extra fun. Thanks for a great story!
Anonymous
11/14/18, 6:17 AM
This was super kinky and well-written. It got a bit confusing at times and I think in the middle with the transformations there could have been a bit more description going on, but the spontaneity was hot.
11/14/18, 5:02 AM
I thought that this was quite sexy. I love subliminal hypnosis and obliviousness. So yeah good stuff.
Nov 13, 2018
Anonymous
11/14/18, 4:59 AM
How do you know this isn't the introduction?